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ERROR CORRECTION CHART

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ERRORCORRECTIONSeveral meals like Needs definition.frijoles fritos Good specific detail(s)!were easy to prepare, but othersRun-on sentence. such as Needs definition.pozoleRun-on sentence. were very difficult to cook.Several meals like .frijoles fritos, fried spicy beans, were easy to prepare; others, such as pozole, (definition) ,were very difficult to cook.Sometimes, my grandma cooked the strangest dishes I Verb Tensehave ever seen. For example, she prepared chiles en nogada for the 2009 Christmas Capitalization erroreve;Sometimes, my grandma cooked the strangest dishes I had ever seen.It wasTime reference unclear. then when I began to Show this!analyze the recipes of the Mexican cuisine,It was that Christmas dinner when I began to think about how weird the combination of all those ingredients is, and thus,When I learned to cook mole poblano about two years ago, I was astonished with the wide range of ingredients required to Redundant.cook this Mexican traditional dish. At Article errorthe first sight, Italics or underline.mole looks like shredded chicken breast topped with an Poor word choice?insipid-red sauce;Punctuation error .Incomplete sentence. nothing special or extraordinary for the Mexican cuisine, []When I learned to cook mole poblano about two years ago, I was astonished with the wide range of ingredients required in this Mexican traditional dish. At first sight, mole looks like shredded chicken breast topped with a tasty red sauce; it was nothing special or extraordinary for Mexican cuisineI could not believe that the insipid topping I Verb Tenseate since I was a child, []I could not believe that the tasty topping I had eaten since I was a childWho in their right mind combines chocolate, chili, nuts and animal crackers?,Punctuation error. I thought for myself, Its nonsense.Punctuation errorWho in their right mind combines chocolate, chili, nuts and animal crackers? I thought to myself, Its nonsense.((Thus, I believed that ))mole poblano is []Mole poblano is a []To my surprise, the dish was delicious:Punctuation error. it tasted like spicy []To my surprise, the dish was delicious; it tasted like spicy []the corn Word form incorrect.smuts analogous to mushroomsthe corn smuts analogue to mushrooms []nevertheless, for Mexican Vaguepeople, the fungus isnevertheless, for most Mexican people, the fungus isI think that quesadillas de huitlacoche Subject-verb agreement error.illustrate howI think that quesadillas de huitlacoche illustratesDuring my lifeRun-on sentence. I have tried(( Vaguedifferent ))Mexican dishes,unnecessary comma from spicy soups like pozole to fried dessertsDuring my life, I have tried Mexican dishes from spicy soups like pozole to fried desserts made of flour and sugarBecause the stew looked like a combination of ground meat, onions, tomatoes, spices, and green peppera typical combination of ingredients in the Mexican cuisine, I decidedBecause the stew looked like a combination of ground meat, onions, tomatoes, spices, and green peppera typical combination of ingredients in Mexican cuisine, I decidedI have learned that no matter how unusual the ingredients of a dish are, since it is a matter of time to accept that meal as an everyday food.I have learned that no matter how unusual the ingredients of a dish are, it is only a matter of time until one accepts that meal as an everyday food.