El compo ca1 draft 2

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Composition Question: You were walking towards the school canteen. Suddenly, you saw some pupils running out of the canteen. It was a normal Thursday morning. The sun was rising and as it spread its warmth, the birds whistled a merry tune. Unfortunately, I was missing out on all of that. I was sitting in my seat in class, with the teacher boring me to death. I was counting down the final seconds to recess, my favourite part of the day. Suddenly, I hearded the bell ringing. It was the sweetest sound to me. I grabbed my wallet and dashed out of my class. I was yearning for the savoury taste of Laksa. I queued up in line for it. I bought a bowl of flaming hot and I could feel the tingling warmth of it on my hands. I hunted down a place to sit and sat down. Just then, I sensed something amiss. The usual cheery chatter of the happy children was clearly absent. Suddenly, I saw some people running out of the canteen like a herd of buffaloes. Turning a blind eye, to the strange phenomenon, I took a bite. The taste of the Laksa was pure ecstasy, like I was floating on cloud nine. I began shoveling everything into my mouth. Just then, when I was lost in food haven, I smelt something apart from my Laksa. I smelt him before I saw him. I could feel his stinky breath behind me. It hit me like a solid fist. I whirled around and saw the face I dreaded to see. It was the face of the repugnant school bully, Adam. Before I knew it, I saw his face coming towards me in slow motion. As the fist hit my stomach, my breath was knocked out of me as I screamed in agony. His henchman formed a circle around me and started sneering. I looked up, just in time to see a fist land squarely on my nose. Blood streamed out of my nose. His henchmen kicked me repeatedly, and I rolled into a ball trying to protect myself, feeling vulnerable. At last, the kicking stopped and they left. Adam stayed back to spit on me. After that, he sneered and left .

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Composition

Question:

You were walking towards the school canteen. Suddenly, you saw

some pupils running out of the canteen.

It was a normal Thursday morning. The sun was rising and as it spread its

warmth, the birds whistled a merry tune. Unfortunately, I was missing out on

all of that. I was sitting in my seat in class, with the teacher boring me to death.

I was counting down the final seconds to recess, my favourite part of the day.

Suddenly, I hearded the bell ringing. It was the sweetest sound to me. I

grabbed my wallet and dashed out of my class. I was yearning for the savoury

taste of Laksa.

I queued up in line for it. I bought a bowl of flaming hot and I could feel

the tingling warmth of it on my hands. I hunted down a place to sit and sat

down. Just then, I sensed something amiss. The usual cheery chatter of the

happy children was clearly absent. Suddenly, I saw some people running out of

the canteen like a herd of buffaloes. Turning a blind eye, to the strange

phenomenon, I took a bite. The taste of the Laksa was pure ecstasy, like I was

floating on cloud nine. I began shoveling everything into my mouth.

Just then, when I was lost in food haven, I smelt something apart from

my Laksa. I smelt him before I saw him. I could feel his stinky breath behind

me. It hit me like a solid fist. I whirled around and saw the face I dreaded to

see. It was the face of the repugnant school bully, Adam. Before I knew it, I saw

his face coming towards me in slow motion. As the fist hit my stomach, my

breath was knocked out of me as I screamed in agony. His henchman formed a

circle around me and started sneering. I looked up, just in time to see a fist

land squarely on my nose. Blood streamed out of my nose. His henchmen

kicked me repeatedly, and I rolled into a ball trying to protect myself, feeling

vulnerable. At last, the kicking stopped and they left. Adam stayed back to spit

on me. After that, he sneered and left .

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Knowing that I had to do something to stop Adam, I immideately ran

down to the general office to tell the principal about Adam. The next day,

Adam was caned and warned never to bully anyone again. Although he

sneered at people, he never attacked them. The school was peaceful again.

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