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Editing for Parallelism
Sara Selby & Chris Tognocchi
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What is Parallel Structure
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Parallel Structure
Use parallel structure with elements joined by coordinating conjunctions.
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Parallel Structure
Use parallel structure with elements in lists or in a series.
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Parallel Structure
Use parallel structure with elements being compared.
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Parallel Structure
Use parallel structure with elements joined by a linking verb or a verb of being.
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Parallel Structure
Use parallel structure with elements joined by a correlative conjunction.
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How to Edit for Parallel Structure
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Editing for Parallel Structure
Convert items from a series into a list to reveal faulty parallelism.
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Editing for Parallel Structure
Using a planner can help you manage your time, organize your tasks, keep track of appointments, for school and my personal life, and list my assignments.
●manage your time●organize your tasks●keep track of appointments●for school and my personal life●list my assignments
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Editing for Parallel Structure
Using a planner can help you manage your time, organize your tasks, keep track of appointments for school and my personal life, and list my assignments.
●manage your time●organize your tasks●keep track of appointments for school and my personal life●list my assignments
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Editing for Parallel Structure
Check for verb tense.
●Present vs Past Tense●Active vs Passive Voice
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Editing for Parallel Structure
Check sentences mixed with clauses or phrases.
●Mixing noun clauses●Mixing clauses or phrases with sentences
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Faulty Parallelism Exercise
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Faulty Parallelism1. In order for you to buy a house, you must save money or it will be necessary for you
to borrow from a lender.
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Faulty Parallelism1. In order for you to buy a house, you must save money or it will be necessary for you
to borrow from a lender.
ANSWER:
1. In order for you to buy a house, you must save money or borrow from a lender.
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Faulty Parallelism2. My son's graduation means that he will be moving to another state and take his
motorcycle with him.
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Faulty Parallelism2. My son's graduation means that he will be moving to another state and take his
motorcycle with him.
ANSWER:
2. My son's graduation means that he will be moving to another state and taking his motorcycle with him.
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Faulty Parallelism3. Aerobic exercises like distance running, swimming, cycling, and long walks are a
good example of healthy living.
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Faulty Parallelism3. Aerobic exercises like distance running, swimming, cycling, and long walks are a
good example of healthy living.
ANSWER:
3. Aerobic exercises like distance running, swimming, cycling, and walking are a good example of healthy living.
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Faulty Parallelism4. Taking too many vitamins can be as harmful as not to consume enough.
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Faulty Parallelism4. Taking too many vitamins can be as harmful as not to consume enough.
ANSWER:
4. Taking too many vitamins can be as harmful as not consuming enough.
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Faulty Parallelism5. A student is not only responsible to their professors but also their classmates, and
their parents as well.
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Faulty Parallelism5. A student is not only responsible to their professors but also their classmates, and
their parents as well.
ANSWER:
5. A student is responsible not only to their professors but also to their classmates and parents.
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Faulty Parallelism6. During Shay’s Rebellion, the farmers had gathered outside the public buildings was
loud and they were angry.
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Faulty Parallelism6. During Shay’s Rebellion, the farmers had gathered outside the public buildings was
loud and they were angry.
ANSWER:
6. During Shay’s Rebellion, the farmers had gathered outside the public buildings were loud and angry.
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Parallel Structure Exercise
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Parallel Structure1. When I was a child, I loved to play in the woods, climb trees, and _____ rocks down
by the river.
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Parallel Structure1. When I was a child, I loved to play in the woods, climb trees, and _____ rocks down
by the river.
ANSWER:
1. When I was a child, I loved to play in the woods, climb trees, and skip rocks down by the river.
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Parallel Structure2. I still enjoy playing in the woods, climbing trees, and _____ rocks down by the river.
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Parallel Structure2. I still enjoy playing in the woods, climbing trees, and _____ rocks down by the river.
ANSWER:
2. I still enjoy playing in the woods, climbing trees, and skipping rocks down by the river.
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Parallel Structure3. Ciarra danced in a play and then _____ a song that made me cry.
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Parallel Structure3. Ciarra danced in a play and then _____ a song that made me cry.
ANSWER:
3. Ciarra danced in a play and then sang a song that made me cry.
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Parallel Structure4. Ciarra said that she wanted to dance in the play and then _____ a song that would
make me cry.
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Parallel Structure4. Ciarra said that she wanted to dance in the play and then _____ a song that would
make me cry.
ANSWER:
4. Ciarra said that she wanted to dance in the play and then sing a song that would make me cry.
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Parallel Structure5. My children spent the afternoon playing Bloodborne, watching YouTube videos, and
_____ pizza.
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Parallel Structure5. My children spent the afternoon playing Bloodborne, watching YouTube videos, and
_____ pizza.
ANSWER:
5. My children spent the afternoon playing Bloodborne, watching YouTube videos, and eating pizza.
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Parallel Structure6. If you want to learn how to play Bloodborne, watch YouTube videos, or _____ pizza,
spend an afternoon with my children.
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Parallel Structure6. If you want to learn how to play Bloodborne, watch YouTube videos, or _____ pizza,
spend an afternoon with my children.
ANSWER:
6. If you want to learn how to play Bloodborne, watch YouTube videos, or eat pizza, spend an afternoon with my children.