DẠNG 1: PIE CHART/GRAPH

Biểu đồ hình tròn : thường dùng để hiển thị mối quan hệ

theo phần trăm giữa các phần khi so với tổng thể.. Thông

qua biểu đồ, ta thấy được sự chiếm vị thế lớn nhất, lớn nhì,

nhỏ nhất trong số những yếu tố được liệt kê trong hình

Ví dụYou should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features

and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Phân biệt emigration, immigration, migration

• Emigration: là danh từ chỉ sự di cư, tiến trình di cư. Ví dụ

như một người nào đó rời đất nước của mình để đến sinh

sống luôn ở một nước khác .

• Immigration: chỉ hành động nhập cư, tức là đến một nước

nào đó để sinh sống hẳn ở đó

• Migration: chỉ sự di chuyển từ nơi này sang nơi khác để

sinh sống làm việc (Emigration và immigration đều là một

dạng của migration)

DÀN BÀI

1. Introduction (mở bài) (details)

2. Overview (tổng quan) (details)

3. Thân bài 1 (details)

4. Thân bài 2

INTRODUCTION

Câu viết lại: The pie charts illustrate the primary

reasons that people came to and left the UK in

2007

Câu của đề bài: The pie charts show the main

reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.

OVERVIEW (Tổng quan)

At first glance it is clear that the main factor influencing

this decision was employment.

The pie charts illustrate the primary reasons that

people came to and left the UK in 2007

Thân Bài

1) Chỉ chọn các chi tiết quan trọng để miêu tả, chú ý đến:

• Tỉ lệ lớn nhất, nhỏ nhất

• Những yếu tố tăng lên

• Những yếu tố giảm đi

• Những yếu tố không đổi

• Những yếu tố biến mất hoặc mới xuất hiện

2) Nhóm các thông tin theo một cách logic để dễ đọc

và theo dõi

3) Sử dụng đa dạng “ngôn ngữ phần trăm”

Ngôn ngữ phần trăm

Phần trăm Cách khác để viết

77% just over three quarters

77% approximately three quarters

49% just under a half

49% nearly a half

32% almost a third

75% - 85% a very large majority

65% - 75% a significant proportion

10% - 15% a minority

5% a very small number

Company A and Company B both had 10%.

The profit remained steady at 10%.

The profit rose to 10%.

The profit peaked at just over 10%.

The monthly profit increased/fell by 10% from 10% to 20%/from 20%

to 10%.

Vietnam had the largest percentage/number (10%/245) of students.

Vietnam had 10% of the students.

10% of the students were from Vietnam.

Vietnam accounted for 10% of the students.

They made twice/three times/four times the profit

percentage/percentage of the profit in May than in March.

Company A‟s profit percentage rose steadily, whereas that of Company

B fell slightly. There were more males than females (10% and 5%

respectively).

Các câu có thể sử dụng khi miêu tả phần trăm

• Having a definite job accounted for 30 per cent of immigration to the UK, and

this figure was very similar for emigration, at 29%. A large number of people,

22%, also emigrated because they were looking for a job, though the

proportion of people entering the UK for this purpose was noticeably lower at

less than a fifth. Another major factor influencing a move to the UK was for

formal study, with over a quarter of people immigrating for this

reason. However, interestingly, only a small minority, 4%, left for this.

The proportions of those moving to join a family member were

quite similar for immigration and emigration, at 15% and 13%

respectively. Although a significant number of people (32%)

gave „other‟ reasons or did not give a reason why they

emigrated, this accounted for only 17% with regards to

immigration.

• Having a definite job accounted for 30 percent of immigration to the UK, and

this figure was very similar for emigration, at 29%. A large number of people,

22%, also emigrated because they were looking for a job, though the

proportion of people entering the UK for this purpose was noticeably lower at

less than a fifth. Another major factor influencing a move to the UK was for

formal study, with over a quarter of people immigrating for this

reason. However, interestingly, only a small minority, 4%, left for this.

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