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How are you getting on? I hope that you are as fit asa fiddle. My family and I are fine over here. I am writing this letter to tell you about my holiday activities. I went to a pineapple canning factory last holiday. The visiting visit was organized by the Interact Club of my school. The objective of this trip was to broaden the mind of the members. There were approximately 40 members and 4 teachers joined joining the trip. We gathered at the school at 8.00 a.m. The teachers gave us some instructions. Then, we went to the factory by bus. On the way to the factory, we were chatting chattedwith full of joyfulness. After an hour, we reached the pineapple plantation field. The workers were harvesting the pineapple in the plantation. They sealed the pineapples that they harvested into boxes. Then, they put them into a lorry. After that, we followed the lorries that transport transported the pineapples. We arrived at the factory after 5 minutes. We got off the bus. The manager welcomed us cordially. Before entering the factory, the manager gave a briefing to us. Then, we entered the factory. We were titillated to see the process of canning pineapple. We saw many workers were working. They peeled the pineapples carefully. Then, they washed the pineapples. After that, they used a knife to cut the pineapples into cubes. Last but not least, the pineapple cubes were canned into the cans. The workers were friendly. They gave us a refulgent (refulgent is related to light) convivial smile. We also took many photographs too. Moreover, the pineapples can be made into syrup too.The A machine sweeten the pineapple with
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How are you getting on? I hope that you are as fit asafiddle. My family and I are fine over here. I am writing thisletterto tell you about my holiday activities. I went to a pineapple canning factory last holiday.
Thevisitingvisitwas organized by the Interact Club of my school. The objective of this trip was to broaden the mind of the members. There were approximately 40 members and 4 teachersjoinedjoiningthe trip. We gathered at the school at 8.00 a.m. The teachers gave us some instructions. Then, we went to the factory by bus.
On the way to the factory, wewere chattingchattedwith full of joyfulness. After an hour, we reached the pineapple plantation field. The workers were harvesting the pineapple in the plantation. They sealed the pineapples that they harvested into boxes. Then, they put them into a lorry.
After that, we followed the lorries thattransporttransportedthe pineapples. We arrived at the factory after 5 minutes. We got off the bus. The manager welcomed us cordially. Before entering the factory, the manager gave a briefing to us. Then, we entered the factory. We were titillated to see the process of canning pineapple.
We saw many workerswereworking. They peeled the pineapples carefully. Then, they washed the pineapples. After that, they used a knife to cut the pineapples into cubes. Last but not least, the pineapple cubes were canned into the cans. The workers were friendly. They gave us arefulgent(refulgent is related to light) convivialsmile. We also took many photographs too.
Moreover, the pineapples can be made into syrup too.TheAmachine sweeten the pineapple with sugars. The manager served us some syrups(juice?). The syrups were splendiferous. Next, the cans were sealed bytheanothermachine. The factory workerswere trying to labellabelledthe cans. The workers packed the cans into boxes afterfinish labelinglabellingthe cans. The products were going to be transported to the hypermarkets and shops.
Lastly, the manager gave us some free pineapple products. We thanked the manager. Before leaving the factory, we took photographs there. Then, we went home. It was the best trip that Inevereverhad before. The trip hadbroadenbroadenedour mind. We had a whale ofatime.
As the saying goes, "Knowledge is power". Therefore, I hope that you can also join some trips too. I think I should pen off here. I have enclosed some photographs for you. I am looking forward to your reply too. Please send my regards to your family. Keep in touch. Bye.
