Comments On The Product Improvements

“I love the layout of the magazine, its very easy to see where everything is and that’s needed when reading a magazine”

“Bring in the text from the sides and space it so it doesn’t look cramped together”

“The colours stand out really well; they’re eye catching and fit in with the theme well. You can tell its based on the indie genre”

“Darken the text on the double page spread so it becomes more readable”

“Having the name ‘INDEX’ represents the genre of indie well, I could clearly tell what magazine I was picking up”

“Change the X so its different to the title font”

“ ‘WIN VIP TICKETS TO V-FEST’ draws the reader in because it appeals to the age group of indie listeners”

“Add a picture or logo to where the competition is to make it recognisable”

“The price of the magazine makes more appealing because people don’t want to pay to much for something they may only read once”

“Put price next to the barcode where people will associate with the price”

“An artist on the front cover draws the attention of the reader because they are able to recognise who the artist in making them want to read more”

“Make sure the artists face isn’t covered by any cover lines”

“The ‘2014 PREVEIW’ address the audience because they feel special that they are reading the magazine because its limited”

“Make this cover line bigger which will be in the eye line of the reader when they pick the magazine up”