Comment on rough cut

The outline of my film:

This story represents a lady who have got a pair of embroidered

shoes is in a tangle by a red dress female phantom. A series of

horrible things happens……

The outline of my opening sequence:

A lady is running in a muddy path in a blue funk. Then the

camera cut back to her memories. A series of toggle screens

between memories and the frames of running in the muddy path.

In the end, the lady sees a lake and she jumps into the water.

Comment:

In my rough cut, I haven’t put the logo in it yet. I just have put a

small number of the titles in the rough cut. And I just have

added sound of footsteps and flash back. I will add heavy

breathing during the lady is running .I also will put the sound of

falling into water at the end of the opening sequence. On the

other hand, background music also need to prove.

Besides the titles and sounds, I change the colour of frames. I

want to make the scenes in low key so that I can emphasize the

horror atmosphere. But I haven’t finished it ,so I will continues

in changing the lighting in my final cut.