Chapter 2 Business Communications : Writing for Business Audiences
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Ch. 1-11Essentials of Business Communication, Asian EditionEssentials of Business Communication, Asian Edition Ch. 2–1
2Essentials of Business Communication, Asian EditionEssentials of Business Communication, Asian Edition Ch. 2–2
Improving Your Business Writing
Improving Your Business Writing
• The best business writing is• Audience oriented
• Purposeful
• Economical –clear,concise,brief
• To improve your writing skills, you need• Good teaching materials with excellent model documents
• An effective writing process
• A trainer (like your instructor)
• Practice
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The Writing ProcessThe Writing Process
Stage 1: Prewriting
Analyzing
AnticipatingAdapting
Stage 2: Writing
ResearchingOrganizing
Composing
Stage 3: Revising
RevisingProofreading
Evaluating
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Factors Determining Channel Selection
Factors Determining Channel Selection
• Importance of message• Amount and speed of feedback required
• Necessity of a permanent record
• Cost of the channel
• Degree of formality required
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Factors Determining Channel Selection
Factors Determining Channel Selection
Possible Channels:E-mail, fax, letter, memo, report, telephone,
voice mail, meeting, conversation, Web• What channel is best to announce decreased
insurance benefits for 250 employees?E-mail or memo
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Factors Determining Channel Selection
Factors Determining Channel Selection
• What channel is best for a sales message promoting
a new product to customers?Letter
• What channel is best for responding to similar customer inquiries?
Web, letter, telephone
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Reader BenefitsReader Benefits
Instead of this:We are promoting a new plan that we believe has many outstanding benefits.
Try this:You will enjoy total peace of mind with our affordable hospitali-zation plan that meets all your needs.
Shape your statements to involve the reader. Strive to develop the “you” attitude.
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Reader BenefitsReader Benefits
Instead of this:Before we can allow you to purchase items on this new account, we must wait two weeks to verify your credit.
Try this:You may begin making purchases on your new account in two weeks.
Shape your statements to involve the reader. Strive to develop the “you” attitude.
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Reader BenefitsReader Benefits
Instead of this:I need your response immediately so that I can make the employee vacation schedule by next week.
Try this:Your quick response means your vacation schedules will be ready next week.
Shape your statements to involve the reader. Strive to develop the “you” attitude.
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Conversational LanguageConversational Language
Instead of this:The undersigned takes pleasure in . . . .
Instead of this:It may be of some concern to you to learn that your check has been received and your account has been credited for $250.
Try this: I’m happy to . . . .
Try this:We’ve credited your account for $250.
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Positive LanguagePositive Language
Instead of this:Employees may not use the First Street entrance during remodeling.
Instead of this:We cannot fill your order until we receive an exact model number.
Try this:Employees may use the Market Street entrance during remodeling.
Try this: We can fill your order once we receive an exact model number.
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Hidden MessagesHidden Messages
Some words and phrases convey a
negative and unpleasant tone. They
may imply a hidden message that the
writer does not intend. Think twice
before using the following negative
expressions.
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Hidden MessagesHidden Messages
Negative Language:You overlooked
You state that
You failed to
You claim that
You are wrong
You do not understand
Your delay
You forgot to
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Inclusive LanguageInclusive Language
Instead of this:Have you called a salesman?
Every executive has his own office.
Try this:Have you called a salesperson?
All executives have their own offices.
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Try Your SkillTry Your Skill
Revise this sentence to create a more conversational tone and to state your idea positively.• The undersigned takes great pleasure in
welcoming you to our staff.
I’m happy to welcome you to our staff.
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Try Your SkillTry Your Skill
Revise this sentence to create a more conversational tone and to state your idea positively.• We cannot send your order from our
warehouse until June 1.
Your order will be on its way to you June 1.
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Try Your SkillTry Your Skill
Revise this sentence to create reader benefits.• I have 15 different financial plans to offer my
investors.
You have 15 different financial plans from which to choose.
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Try Your SkillTry Your Skill
Revise this sentence to create reader benefits.• We want all newly hired employees to use our
carpooling program for at least three months.
As a newly hired employee, you won’t have to drive to work for the first three months because you can carpool.
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Plain LanguagePlain Language
Avoid federalese, bureaucratese, and inflated language.
Federalese: Each person to whom the request is herein addressed
is henceforth solicited to submit, or to have his or her department
representative submit, to the Department of Labor official
described above, a comment on whether the proposed plan, in his
or her considered view, meets the requirements of the 2003 law.
Simple Translation: You may wish to comment on whether the
proposed plan meets the requirements of the 2003 law.
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Familiar WordsFamiliar Words
Less familiar words:encounter
extrapolate
obligatory
terminate
Simple alternatives:meet
project
required
end
Avoid long, difficult, and unfamiliar words. Use short, simple, and common words whenever possible.
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Try Your SkillTry Your Skill
Revise this sentence using simpler language.• You may encounter difficulties in terminating
the contract.
You may meet difficulties in ending the contract.
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Try Your SkillTry Your Skill
Revise this sentence using simpler language.• As stipulated, we extrapolated the budget
figures for two years.
As required, we projected the budget figures for two years.
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Try Your SkillTry Your Skill
Revise this sentence using simpler language.• Will you utilize workbooks during the
obligatory training period?
Will you use workbooks during the required training period?
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Try Your SkillTry Your Skill
Revise this sentence using simpler language.• We anticipate that a majority of the
alternatives will be fundamental enough to meet our requirements.
We expect that most of the choices will be basic enough to meet our needs.
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Seven Ways Technology Can Improve Your Business WritingSeven Ways Technology Can
Improve Your Business Writing
• Fighting writer’s block• Collecting information electronically• Outlining and organizing ideas• Improving correctness and precision• Adding graphics for emphasis• Designing and producing professional-looking
documents, presentations, and Web pages• Using collaborative software for team writing
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