1. Changes After Audience Consultance Rebecca Paterson

2. Front Cover 3. Made the title of the magazine bigger so itis more eye catching.I have changes the font of the bigger text to a moreappropriate font to fit in better with the magazinegenre. I also changed the pull quote so that themagazine had a better tone to it.I have changed the sticker layout, Ithink that the new version looks alot more effective and professionalthan before I think that wordinghas also improved.I have changed the alignment of the text along theright hand side I think it looks neater and moreprofessional, it didnt look as effective going alongthe outline of the tree putting it to the left hasmade it look less clustered and messy. When looking at other magazines the date and price are often by the barcode, I moved this to fit in with other similar magazines. 4. Contents Pages 5. I changed the font of the headingto keep in theme with the frontcover fonts and the font makes itlook more effective as an indiemagazine.I have aligned the number properly and made all the numbers one colour to make the magazine look more professional.I changed the effects on the framesfrom a bevel to a drop shadow, Ithought that this made the photoslook better and didnt take awayfrom the images like the bevel did.I aligned the text I looked at other magazine editorsand changed the notes, some had lines on so itfont to keep a looked like note paper, I thoughtrunning theme that this convention added well tolike the front my magazine because of the use ofcover, it makes it lines I have already used, it makesappear my magazine contents page lookprofessional and professional and a good use ofalso neater . conventions. 6. Double Page Spread 7. I changed the font , layout and size of the title,I looked at other magazines and from myaudience feedback I found that having theartist name was more common then an actualtitle, I think it looks more professional andtidier in the page.I changed the format so that I changed the size and position of thethe picture covers one pageimage, I think that it looks less squashedand the text covers the other, and neater so that you can easily see allit looks more effective and is the information that the audience needs.more efficient.I changedthe effectson this textI changed theinstead of afont andbevel I usedplacement of thea droppull quote I thinkshadow it it looks better inmakes the the corner ittext standcompliments theout more on image.top of theimage. I added a page number