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    Traffic Congestion

    Cause and Effect Essay

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    Introduction

    Three sentences

    2: Two background sentences

    1: This essay will discuss

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    Introduction: Background

    Two sentences

    Describe the current situation or

    Describe the past and present or

    Give one side and the other side

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    Introduction: Background Ex.1

    Describe the current situation

    Abu Dhabi is a modern city, but itfaces a modern problem. Everymorning and evening, the streets arecrowded with cars, taxis and trucks.

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    Introduction: Background Ex.2

    Describe the past and present

    Thirty years ago there were only ahandful of cars in the dusty town ofAbu Dhabi. Today, the streets arebumper-to-bumper with modern 4WDvehicles, luxury saloons, and taxis.

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    Introduction: Background Ex.3

    Give one side and the other side

    Abu Dhabi is one of the most highlydeveloped cities in the Arab world.However, traffic congestion is a seriousproblem.

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    Introduction: Thesis

    Thesis: Say what the essay will do;

    This essay will examine the twoobvious causes of traffic congestion in

    Abu Dhabi in terms of the _______and _______.

    This essay will illustrate the twoprimary implications of traffic

    congestion in Abu Dhabi in terms ofthe _______ and _______.

    discuss, analyze, describe, investigate,

    outline, look at, mention, illustrate,

    review, explore,

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    Sample Introduction

    Abu Dhabi is a modern city, but it also

    has a modern problem. Every morningand evening, the streets are crowdedwith cars, taxis and trucks. This essaywill examine the two obvious causes oftraffic congestion in Abu Dhabi in

    terms of the _______ and _______.

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    Causes

    Seven sentences (approx.)

    Opening sentence (Topic) Cause 1, more information

    Cause 2, more information

    Cause 3, more information

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    Causes: Topic Sentences

    The first main factor that hascontributed to Abu Dhabis trafficproblems is _________.

    Abu Dhabis gridlock is the result of__________.

    The real reason for Abu Dhabistraffic problems is _________.

    Specify! Dont use pronouns like This or Itin the opening.

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    Causes

    No trains, trams, buses, metro, etc (poor publictransport infrastructure)

    Too many taxis

    Everybody can afford a car due to rapideconomic growth

    Road building cannot keep up

    Rapid population growth

    Limited space on the island

    High temperatures

    Children cannot walk to school

    No staggered hours

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    Causes: Sample 1

    One of the main causes ofcongestion is the ever escalating

    number of cars. Because of theEmirates rapid economic growth,most residents can afford privatevehicles.

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    Causes: Sample 2

    Another contributing factor is thelack of a public transport

    infrastructure. The absence ofbuses, trains or an undergroundforces residents to rely on cars ortaxis.

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    Causes: Sample 3

    The road system is another causeof congestion. Although the roads

    are highly developed, plannershave not been able to keep upwith the rapid expansion of the

    population. Frequent road works

    also lead to delays.

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    Effects

    Seven sentences (approx.)

    Opening sentence (Topic) Effect 1, more information

    Effect 2, more information

    Effect 3, more information

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    Effects

    Higher levels of anger and frustration

    More air pollution due to emissions

    Increased noise pollution More wasted time, delays at work and

    at school or when doing errands

    Reduced productivity

    Less pleasant environment

    Higher motoring costs (wasted fuel)

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    Effects: Topic Sentences

    This congestion has brought aboutan adverse effect on _________.

    Abu Dhabis traffic affects ________negatively.

    Traffic jam triggers many negativeconsequences on the city.

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    Effects: Sample 1

    The tremendous effect is theincreased anger and frustration.

    Commuters and shoppersexperience delays, resulting intension and stress as they sit intraffic. This can even lead to an

    increasing accident rates.

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    Effects: Sample 2

    Another adverse effect is on theenvironment. Air quality declines

    as vehicle emissions rise. Noiselevels also increase. In general,the city becomes a less pleasant

    place to live or work.

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    Effects: Sample 3

    A major effect is on productivityand efficiency. Workers and

    students are late for work orschool. Salesmen and travelerswaste hours in traffic jams,leading to lost profits.

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    Conclusion

    Two or three sentences

    Summarise the main ideas and/or Give your opinion

    Look to the Future

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    Conclusion: Sample 1

    Overall, Abu Dhabis trafficproblems are caused by an over-reliance on private transport anda failure to keep up with therapidly expanding population.However, the city has shown itcan solve problems in the past,

    and it is feasible that trafficcongestion can be reduced in thefuture.

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    Conclusion: Sample 2

    Overall, too many cars for toofew road have led to severe

    congestion in the city. However,if the municipal authoritiesencourage residents to use publictransport, I am sure Abu Dhabi

    will continue to be a pleasant cityto live in the future.

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    Traffic Congestion

    Cause and Effect Essay