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GRAMMAR LESSON
Based on your first essays,Let’s talk about the following:
Run-on SentencesComma Splices
Fragments
Homonyms
Subject verb agreement
Commas
First Let’s Deal with the Sentence
A sentence has a subject and verb
It can stand alone and make sense
Mary sneezed. Some parts of
Mexico are not safe for tourists.
Obama’s healthcare plan was immediately labeled a socialist product.
John and Mary recently divorced.
John and Mary recently divorced and remarried other people.
Before John and Mary divorced, they fought on a daily basis.
John and Mary divorced, but marriage is something they still value.
Two ways sentences can be wrecked!
If you put two sentences together, you have created a run-on sentence:
I enjoy my English class I don’t like writing essays.
If you try separating the sentences with a comma, you’ve created a comma splice.
I like my English class, I don’t like writing essays.
Here are your options:
I enjoy my English class; I don’t like writing essays.
I enjoy my English class; however, I don’t like writing essays.
I enjoy my English class, but I don’t like writing essays.
I enjoy my English class. I don’t like writing essays.
THE OPPOSITE OF WRITING A RUN-ON OR
COMMA SPLICE SENTENCE ISWriting a fragment
Writing a fragment is a serious misstep
Writing a fragment tells the reader that you have not
mastered writing sentences
Let’s discuss why…
What is a Fragment?
Just like the dictionary definition of fragment says, it is just a piece of something; a piece of a whole.
Writing only a piece of a sentence is going to confuse your reader.
The performance presented by the actors in “Facing the Rain.”
What is missing? Both the subject
and verb are missing!
I really enjoyed the performance by the actors in “Facing the Rain.”
Each actor had. What’s missing? Information! What did each
actor have? Each actor had a
compelling story to tell.
Let’s practice.
MOST STUDENTS DON’T MAKE SUCH
BLATANT FRAGMENTS THOUGH…
Here’s how students tend to make fragments:
They are writing their sentence and finish It too quickly with a period.
Then they finish the thought in the next sentence.
Example: there are three main types of college drinkers. The social,
casual, and binge drinker.Which sentence above is a
fragment?
Let’s move onto Homonyms
Homonyms are words that sound alike but are spelled differently:
There, They’re, Their Your, You’re It’s, Its Effect, Affect Whether, Weather Loose, Lose Than, Then Quite, Quiet Accept, Except Let’s practice
Many of you had SVA: Subject Verb Agreement
Problems
A SINGULAR SUBJECT MUST HAVE A SINGULAR VERB
A PLURAL SUBJECT MUST HAVE A PLURAL VERB
John writes in his journal everyday.
Also note: singular pronoun must be used.
Everyone uses his or her favorite deodorant after a shower.
Note: singular pronoun is used.
John and Mary write in their journals everyday.
Also note: plural pronoun must be used.
Most people use their favorite deodorant after a shower.
Note: plural pronoun is used
What do you think is the most misused
punctuation mark?
If you said the comma, you are right!
Here are the basic rules for comma usage:
Separates two sentences using a coordinating conjunction
I enjoy my English class, but I don’t like writing essays.
Separate items in a list
The various types of college drinkers are the social drinkers, the partiers, and the binge drinkers.
More about the Comma:
Sets off a dependent clause added to the beginning of an independent clause:
Even though it is Monday, I’m still glad to be at work!
Because you are my friend, I am going to lend you $100.
Allows an interruption in a sentence:
Gloria, my mother-in-law, is going to babysit my son.
But let’s go back to the other column:
I’m still glad to be at work even though it is Monday.
I am going to lend you $100 because you are my friend.