Audience feedback

What did you learn from audience feedback?

A)Documentary &

B) Ancillary

A) Documentary

Documentary Draft 1Name/Gender/age

The audience said… Therefore for next draft we considered…

MaryFemale16

She could not understand some of what the presenter was saying as their was wind

We changed location in hope that there was no wind

MatthewMale15

He didn’t learn enough about video games We made sure the script was more detailed

MonicaFemale37

She got bored during the sociologist interview

Asked a more focused question so the sociologist would give us a shorter answer

AshleyMale25

Didn’t understand why there was a random statistic

Changed the statistic, to make in link in more



ShaynaFemale18

Wasn’t too fond of the shadows in the experiment, looked amateur

We filmed the experiment with less artificial lighting to prevent shadows

KatieFemale30

The wind was distracting, couldn’t hear presenter properly

We filmed by the canal, where there was less wind

UnityFemale18

Didn’t understand why there were random clips of London at the beginning

Got rid of most of the London clips at the beginning

MartinMale18

It was strange that the documentary had no title

Included a title



TsimangFemale 18

She liked the location of the canal Nothing, we made sure this stayed the same

JordanMale20

The way that the public described how to play each video game was long winded

We got rid of the public explanations of video games

KellyFemale13

The title was basic and didn’t match the documentary

Considered a different title but did not have time to put this in

PatriciaFemale22

She like the upbeat music for the experiment

Nothing, we kept the upbeat music



EmmanuelMale 15

Learnt from footage of Tomb radar, Gta and Last of us

We kept all of these games

EllieFemale17

It was confusing that there was no sound after half way

We made sure that the same corrupt file didn’t occur

KyleMale19

Liked learning about the different video game genres

Kept the idea of different video game genres

SebastianMale33

In one of the public interviews you can see the camera in the reflection

We got rid of this public interview and replaced it with a new one

B) Ancillaries

Ancillary (DPS) Draft 1Name/Gender/agei


Unity Female 18

The font of the title didn’t fit the genre of video games

Changed font, to fit video game genre

CynthiaFemale10

Picture of pam looks bad quality Instead of using an iPad we used a good quality camera to improve image

Monica Female 37

Didn’t look like a real magazine looks quite basic

Tried to make magazine more challenging by adding graphic behind text

MichaelMale20

Liked the quote in middle of text Kept the pull quote

Ancillary (Advert) Draft 1Name/Gender/age


SarahFemale29

Picture is dark and terrible quality Didn’t take picture on iPad, instead used a professional camera which improved quality of photo

Samuel Male15

Graphic and channel 4 logo do not match, looks odd

Made sure graphic and channel 4 logo matched

CatherineFemale16

Font doesn’t look like the font channel 4 would use

Tried to make our font looks as much like channel 4’s as we could

Joanne Female19

Didn’t understand why there were too children playing video game

Didn’t use two children, instead we changed it to a recognisable video game character

Ancillary (DPS) Draft 2Name/Gender/age


Monica Female37

Title doesn’t really match the image, it’s a little confusing

We changed the title to match image

AndrewMale 16

Cant tell what exactly the graphic is behind the text

Got rid of the graphic behind text

Amber Female18

Picture looks professional and good quality

We made sure we used the same camera to take pictures for this draft

AmyFemale18

Doesn’t really look like a video game magazine, there should be more graphics

We decided to add more graphics to make it fir the video game genre

Ancillary (Advert) Draft 2

Name/Gender/age


JoanFemale15

I like how Laura was the main focus as the background is blurred

we would continue using this as it would attract the audience

MarkMale23

I was confused who the character was meant to be, just a random person playing

we need to think about the costume so the characters would look recognisable

LaurenFemale19

i like how the boxes was nearly transparent so you can still see the image behind the text

we would continue bringing down the opacity so the audience could still see the image

Ancillary (DPS) Draft 3Name/Gender/age


CurtisMale 26

It was all the same colour, better if had different colours to make it more like a video game colour scheme

We would use a variety of colours other than orange

KathrineFemale43

I like the graphic on top of the page so the audience know that this magazine is in the technology category

We would continue using this as it shows organisation

BartMale31

Im confused as to why the players are playing video game outside

We need to make it more realistic that the characters would play video game indoors rather than outside

Ancillary (Advert) Draft 3Name/Gender/age


PamelaFemale29

I like the shadows behind the text makes it look as if its 3D

We would continue using the shadow behind the text as it gives he advert dimention

JosephMale 20

The characters look familiar but I’m still not sure who they are

We need to make it more recognisable who the characters are as the costume itself is not good enough

MikeMale17

I like how the box behind the text has the same colour as the channel 4 logo

We would continue using this as it makes the audience want to look at it

Audience feedback

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