Assignment 11 – draft 5 opening sequence draft 3.

Luara

Kauana

Chantelle

Teacher assessment.

Even better if:

• Have 2 folders

• Have close-up shots of him writing.

• Distinct way of real life and flashback.

• Improve on character representation.

• Not being dead, but missing.

• Change editing.

• Change ending.

• Have her with a voice over.

Even better if :

• Put titles in a different place. • Have a background song for the whole opening

sequence• Put pictures of crime scene.• More match on action• Usa camera pan and zoom to concentrate on

specific words.• Panning from bottom• Last shot her face.• Variety of shots of her sitting down.

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Decisions and changes.

Problems and obstacles.

Changes from Draft 2 to Draft 3.

How has these helped us improve?

New opening sequence.

Story board.

Shot list

Script.

How are we creating enigma?

Audience feedback for Draft 2.

Character.

Location.