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Panel 1 Edie is sitting on a chair, in his room, inside hishouse. He is working on his computer. The computer of the future uses a touch screen, a touch keyboard andvoice commands. He asks his house robot model G1

EDIEG1, do bring coffee execute.

Panel 2 G1, a house robot used for house keeping purposes,leaves the room.

G1G1, bring coffee, executing.

Panel 3 We see Edie looking at his screen, typing

Caption Edie.hacker.date = 2052;

Caption Edie.hacker.place = "his house";

Panel 4 We see Edie's hands clicking on the "application >vChat" key on his "touchboard".

Panel 5 We see from over Edie's shoulder, on his computerscreen, the face of Jane, his hacker friend. She talksto him through the computer speakers.

JANEEdie! You have to check out alt.binary.religion

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Panel 1 We see Edie from Jane's computer screen, over hershoulder.

EDIENewsgroups? Who still uses that old artifact. I've never heard anyone mention it to me since historyclass at Xerox High School. Are you joking me Jane.

Panel 2 Back to over Edie's shoulder view of Jane.

JANENo, I'm serious, Edie! You have to check (her voicebecomes scrambled) Ediiiiie!!

Panel 3 Face view of Edie.

EDIEJane? Jane? Uh! Strange, I've lost her signal. I have to bug report it, I've never heard of vChatlosing a signal before.

Panel 4 G1 comes back in Edie's room. With a coffee on his all

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purpose container.

G1G1, bring coffee, executed, on standby.

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Panel 1 Sky view of a skyscraper.

Caption Secret.meeting.initialize( Vatican_Minister, United_Nations_Ambassador,Ria_Corp_Representative);

Panel 2 A dark room, 3 men are sitting around a big table. Wesee guards standing up behind them.

VATICAN MINISTERGentleman, his Holiness himself, the pope, is willing to invest as much money and power requiredto keep this information a secret.

UNITED NATIONS AMBASSADORI agree, such a revelation could lead to total anarchy. We cannot permit normal citizen to beaware of it.

RIA CORP. REPRESENTATIVEWell, we have made the discovery. Dated it a thousand times. You have seen it with your owneyes. We have found an angel looking fossil and itdates back from before the dinosaurs.

Panel 3 A guard suddenly enters the room

Panel 4 The 3 men look at the guard that just entered, annoyedand intrigued from being interrupted in their talk.

UNITED NATIONS AMBASSADORWe gave strict orders not to be disturbed! I hope it's important. What is your inquiry?

Panel 5 The guard, in "garde à vous", tells them

GUARDPardon my intrusion sir. Intel has informed us thatthere has been a leak of information. A photographcontaining a GPS digital seal showing the fossil onit's discovery site was released unto the Usenet network a couple of hours ago.

Panel 6 3 dudes. frustration.

Panel 7 Guard

GUARD

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However sir, you'll be pleased to know we havesuccessfully removed all traces of it now.

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Panel 1 Face view of the United Nation Ambassador. He looksfurious.

UNITED NATIONS AMBASSADORHow did this happen! Incompetency runs throughout this union. Was their any damage done?

Panel 2 We see the 3 men looking back at the guard and theguard which replies.

GUARDSir, a girl hacker from London. Intel said she's the only one to have accessed the image during thetime it was online. We have safely seized allinformation modules she possessed and brought her to the Unconnected.

Panel 3 View of the whole room, we see the 3 men and theguard.

UNITED NATIONS AMBASSADORGentleman, we don't seem to have any other choice.

VATICAN MINISTERAgreed.

RIA CORP. REPRESENTATIVEYou have convinced Ria Corp. then. Money in exchange for our discovery.

Panel 4 The United Nation Ambassador points at the Guard

UNITED NATIONS AMBASSADORBring me google.

Caption Secret.meeting.exit();

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Panel 1 In a desert somewhere near Jerusalem. We see anarchitectural site. Tents and tables are set and a square grid is delimited around an area. Do not enteris written on it. Scientist and local Arabic lookingpeople are standing inside the delimited area.

Caption RiaCorp.earlier.place = "Near Jerusalem";

Caption RiaCorp.earlier.leak(photograph);

Panel 2 A local Arabic looking man with a Starbucks writtencoat carrying a plate of coffee is entering the Do Not

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Enter area by passing under the tape.

Panel 3 We see scientist talking around a fossil on theground. The fossil is shaped like an angel. It has thebody of a human, but it has wings.

SCIENTIST 1I am dazzled. The fossil of an angel. God himself didn't predict that happening.

SCIENTIST 2The bible is just a story, inspired by ancient relics and written by ingenious minds trying tocheat people with false beliefs. This fossil is aproof of that.

SCIENTIST 3It doesn't deny the existence of Angels as the bible explains it. It just leaves us to believethey are real and used to walk the earth.

Panel 4 Overview of the entire delimited area. The 3scientists around the fossil. 2 guards around them andthe Starbuck's local delivery man.

SCIENTIST 2The bible states that earth was created in seven days. For humans to live in, as an eden. Not as ahost for angels. Angels are just a legend, this isthe proof, the bible is just a myth of ancient men who probably found traces of this angel specie andhid it from the world.

GUARDHey you! Where do you think you're going?

LOCAL DELIVERY MANCoffee, ordered coffee. I bring, 20.85$

Panel 5 The guard escorts the delivery man outside thedelimited area.

GUARD, PUSHING THE MANYou're not allowed in here.

Panel 6 We see the delivery man looking back inside thedelimited area towards the fossil.

Panel 7 Zoom in on the wrist watch of the delivery man. We seethe words: Snapshot Uploaded. Written on it's screen.

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Panel 1 Back inside Edie's room. We see Edie pulling out anold box from the corner of his room.

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Edie.hacker.place = "his house";

Caption Edie.hacker.revelation();

Panel 2 Edie sets up an old computer on his desk.

EDIEI'm glad I kept this old grand pa.

Panel 3 Edie clicks on the Power button of the computer.

Panel 4 We see Edie looking at the old computer monitor.

EDIEOMG, the Internet still exists! I thought Googlenethad replaced everything. Weird, alt.binary.religionis empty. Jane would not have. Something is fishy.

Panel 5 Edie's finger starts acting out a bunch of informationon the old computer keyboard.

Panel 6 The screen shows a bunch of text, scrips, dos like.

EDIEWell look at that, I still got it.

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Panel 1 Edie looks at G1

EDIEG1, do bring x86 intel computer manual, execute.

G1G1, bring x86 intel computer manual, error: The supplied object is not inside positioning database.Code:#209-412.

Panel 2 Face view of Edie looking surprised.

EDIEObject not in database? Of course, back then, manuals weren't tagged. They're not connected togooglenet, G1 has no way to know where it is.

Panel 3 Edie searches through the old computer box and finds apaper manual.

EDIEHere it is. Ah, the feel of paper, I miss it.

Panel 4 Edie flips through the pages and read

EDIEUsenet is a world-wide distributed Internet discussion system. A newsgroup is a repository

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usually within the Usenet system, for messagesposted from many users in different locations. There is no central server, nor central systemowner. Usenet is distributed among a large,constantly changing conglomeration of servers whichstore and forward messages to one another.

EDIEThis means, I might be able to find a server on thenetwork that still has the information. If I'mlucky, it hasn't been deleted from all servers.

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Panel 1 Edie starts typing on the old keyboard once again.

EDIEI got it, the IP traces back to google itself! Why would google delete informations. They are thesafeguard of communication.

Panel 2 We see the screen which is written on it: DownloadCompleted.

Panel 3 We see Edie's face, he is shocked!

EDIEThis is incredible. A fossil of an angel. It can't be real, but the image is timestamped and GPSstamped. Photographed 2 days ago in the JudeanDesert. I see Ria Corp. OMG, this is real!

Panel 4 Picture of the old computer screen, a firewall popupshows on the screen and reads: Intrusion Detected, backtracked Google Corp.

Panel 5 Edie goes back on his regular computer to check outsomething.

EDIEGoogle is trying to fiddle in my computer. They probably traced me. Everything I wear is connected,GPS traceable. CUTV inside my house probablyrecorded everything. Jane, they probably got Jane when I was vChating with her.

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Panel 1 Edie walks around in his room, looking worried.

Caption Edie.hacker.thinking();

Caption Edie.hacker.heroicAct.begin();

Panel 2 Edie face view, with his finger up.

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EDIEI can't run away. They're everywhere. I'd have to trow out all my clothes, leave all my stuff here,because they are connected to googlenet. Wherewould I hide after that, CUTVs are everywhere, recognizing my face signature. I need the people, Igot to find a way to propagate the photographbefore they get me just like they got Jane.

Panel 3 Edie jumps on his chair and computer.

Panel 4 Shot of his hands cramming together, getting ready foraction.

Panel 5 Face view of Eddie, he looks convinced to do this.

EDIEGooglenet, you've met you're match. I'll have to create a macro bot that crawls and replicateshimself over all the networks node.

(CLICK CLACK CLICK CLICK CLACK CLICK)

Panel 6 We see the computer screen, it reads Uploading CrawlerVirus, propagating...

Panel 7 Edie looks out the window, he sees cars parking infront, Guards coming out.

EDIEHopefully my virus will post the photograph allover googlenet before they can stop it.

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Panel 1 In a dark room, build in concrete.

Caption Edie.hacker.terminated();

Caption Edie.prisoner.initialize();

Panel 2 We see Edie sitting on a chair, talking to someone infront of him. We only see the back of the other person, it looks like a woman.

EDIESo, you're saying everything in this place is disconnected.

Panel 3 Front view of Jane, she is the woman Eddie is talkingto.

Caption Jane.prisoner.alone = False;

JANECorrect. Everything here is unconnected. In fact,

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this place is called the Unconnected.

Panel 4 View of Eddie and Jane from the side.

EDIESo it's a jail.

JANEIt's a secret

Caption Secret.operation.status = "Success";