Name: Krismonalia RizkiClass/No: XI MIPA 3 / 17Jakarta As A Bad Working Place For ExpatritiesJakarta is the second-worst place for expatriates to work in outside of the United States of America, Canada and Western Europe. It is according to a recent report published by Businessweek.The Businessweek report rank emerging markets that might be challenging to move into due to their level of pollution, disease, political violence and availability of good and services.The report rank Jakarta second, just below Lagos in Nageria and above Riyadh Saudi Arabia and say the threat of violence from extremest. In particular, it is serious drawback to living in Jakarta. Bombings targeting foreign interests in Jakarta, such as the JW Marriot hotel bombing in 2003, have been repeated elsewhere in the city.The report say despite problem common to many developing cities such as the risk of disease, poor sanitation, and excessive pollution, Indonesia can be an enticing location.In response, the Jakarta administration take the report positively, saying it can spur the administration to improve its performance.A. Structure Of The Texta. Thesis: paragraph 1Introduces the topic and shows speaker or writers position; Outlines of the arguments to be presented.b. Arguments: paragraph 2 4 It consists about the states of the main argument, develops and supports each point of argument.c. Reiteration: paragraph 5 (the last paragraph)Restatement, restates speaker or writers position.B. Languange Featuresa. Emotive words SeriousIn particular, it is serious drawback to living in Jakarta.b. Connective or link argument In particular, was serious drawback to living in Jakarta.c. Simple present Jakarta is the second-worst place for expatriates to work in outside of the United States of America, Canada and Western Europe. The report say despite problem common to many developing cities such as the risk of disease, poor sanitation, and excessive pollution, Indonesia can be an enticing location.d. Compound sentence The report rank Jakarta second, just below Lagos in Nageria and above Riyadh Saudi Arabia and say the threat of violence from extremest.e. Qualify statement In response, the Jakarta administration take the report positively, saying it could spur the administration to improve its performance. It is according to a recent report published by Businessweek.f. Complex sentence Bombings targeting foreign interests in Jakarta, such as the JW Marriot hotel bombing in 2003,....

Name: Krismonalia RizkiClass/No: XI MIPA 3 / 17Cars Should Be Banned In The CityCars should be banned in the city. As we all know, cars create pollution, and cause a lot of road deaths and other accidents.Firstly, cars, as we all know, contribute to most of the pollution in the world. Cars emit a deadly gas that causes illnesses such as bronchitis, lung cancer, and triggers off asthma. Some of these illnesses are so bad that people can die from them.Secondly, the city is very busy. Pedestrians wander everywhere and cars commonly hit pedestrians in the city, which causes them to die. Cars today are our roads biggest killers.Thirdly, cars are very noisy. If you live in the city, you may find it hard to sleep at night, or concentrate on your homework, and especially talk to someone.In conclusion, cars should be banned from the city for the reasons listed.

A. Structure Of the Texta. Thesis : paragraph 1Introduces the topic and shows speaker or writers position; Outlines of the arguments to be presented.b. Arguments: paragraph 2 3 It consists about the states of the main argument, develops and supports each point of argument.c. Reiteration: paragraph 4 (the last paragraph)Restatement, restates speaker or writers position.B. Languange Featuresa. Emotive words Concentrateb. Connective or link argument Secondly, the city is very busy. Pedestrians wander everywhere and cars commonly hit pedestrians in the city, which causes them to die. Cars today are our roads biggest killers. Thirdly, cars are very noisy. If you live in the city, you may find it hard to sleep at night, or concentrate on your homework, and especially talk to someone.c. Simple present Cars emit a deadly gas that causes illnesses such as bronchitis, lung cancer, and triggers off asthma. If you live in the city, you may find it hard to sleep at night, or concentrate on your homework, and especially talk to someone.d. Compound sentence As we all know, cars create pollution, and cause a lot of road deaths and other accidents. ...,you may find it hard to sleep at night, or concentrate on your homework, and especially talk to someone.e. Qualify statement Cars today are our roads biggest killers. As we all know, cars create pollutionf. Complex sentence Pedestrians wander everywhere and cars commonly hit pedestrians in the city, which causes them to die.