American Dream Essay Outline
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Understanding the Origins and Development of the "American Dream":
An Analysis of Jefferson and Franklin's Works
I. Introduction:
The concept of the “American dream” is generally defined as the opportunity to achieve
success in America through hard work and individual merit without any obstacles and
restrictions. Although there are many different interpretations of the “American dream,” this
inspiring and unique notion of success is deeply rooted and indirectly developed through many
famous literary works in the early revolutionary days of America. In the "Declaration of
Independence" (1776), Thomas Jefferson powerfully argues for a separate American
government, away from British tyranny, to protect the "inalienable rights" of the American
people to "life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness." This famous parallelism emphasizes the
fact that anyone in America has the right to live, to be free, and to have opportunities to be
happy, which has become an integral part of the definition of the "American dream." In
addition, Benjamin Franklin's Autobiography (1793) provides a detailed account of the humble
beginnings of Franklin's career as a printer in Philadelphia and emphasizes the importance of
self-reliance, determination, and perseverance in the face of adversity, which definitely added to
the concept of the "American dream." Franklin's Poor Richard's Almanac (1739) also
contributed to the "American dream" idea through phrases such as "there are no gains without
pains," as well as many other famous aphorisms.
Thesis: Therefore, the concept of the "American dream" became clearly established and
implicitly defined through the famous phrases such as "life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness"
(in Jefferson's "Declaration of Independence") and "there are no gains without pains" (in Poor
Richard's Almanac) and through the ideas of self-reliance, determination, and perseverance (in
Franklin's Autobiography).
II. Body Paragraph 1:
A. The famous phrase "life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness" in the "Declaration
of Independence" greatly contributes to the concept of the "American dream" because it
highlights the "self-evident truth" that the American people have the government-
protected, "inalienable rights" to live, to be free, and to have the opportunities to be
happy without the limitations or restrictions of a tyrannical government.
B. This idea of the American people having the inherent rights to live and be free in
order to achieve happiness was unique and revolutionary at the time because the British
government unilaterally controlled the American colonies with unfair laws of taxation
without representation, even to the point of occupying the colonies with British military
forces to enforce the laws.
C. Supporting Evidence / Examples:
1. The "American dream" idea is deeply rooted in the "Declaration of
Independence" because the right to live and be free for the pursuit of happiness
is the essence of the "American dream."
2. "We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that
they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable rights, that among
these are life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness."
3. Jefferson argues for American independence from British tyranny by
logically stating that the American people have right to establish their own
government to protect their "inalienable rights" to "life, liberty, and the pursuit
of happiness."
D. Thus, the "Declaration of Independence" argued for the separation of the American
colonies from British tyranny by establishing the rights of the American colonists to
"life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness," all of which lay the foundations of the
concept of the "American dream."
III. Body Paragraph 2:
A. The famous aphorisms, "there are no gains without pains" and "diligence is the
mother of good luck," in Franklin's Poor Richard's Almanac augment the concept of the
"American dream" because these phrases emphasize the idea that, with hard-work,
perseverance, and diligence, one can achieve success and happiness in America.
B. The theme of overcoming adversity through diligence, hard-work, and perseverance
is one of the central tenets of the "American dream," and this is clearly expressed in the
aphorisms.
C. Supporting Evidence / Examples:
1. "There are no gains without pains" - this means that one cannot achieve
success or accomplish a task without some amount of sacrifice and hard-work.
"Diligence is the mother of good luck" - this means that the harder one works,
the more prepared one is for receiving good luck (ex. if one works hard, then
one is more prepared for the fortunate chance to be promoted)
D. The wisdom of hard-work, diligence, and perseverance from the aphorisms in
Franklin's Poor Richard's Almanac adds to the concept of the "American dream."
IV. Body Paragraph 3:
A. The anecdotes of Benjamin Franklin's humble beginnings to become a printer and
successful businessman in America (as described in the Autobiography) highlight the
themes of self-reliance, determination, and perseverance, which are pertinent to a better
understanding of the "American dream."
B. Self-reliance, determination, and perseverance in the face of adversity enabled
Franklin to reach Philadelphia and pursue his goals of being a successful printer, and
the morality of this and many other anecdotes of Franklin's successful life illustrates the
"American dream."
C. Supporting Evidence / Examples:
1. In the excerpt from Franklin's The Autobiography, Franklin vividly
describes, in particular detail, his early beginnings and employment with his
older brother in Boston and his journey to Philadelphia in search for a new
printing job. After receiving "tyrannical treatment" from his brother (his
brother would speak badly of Franklin to every other nearby potential
employer) and the fact that his brother was imprisoned for a month, Franklin
decided to head to New York with help of his friend Collins. Therefore,
Franklin sold some of his books for little money and took a boat to New York to
ask Mr. William Bradford for a printing job, but was finally directed to go to
Philadelphia to help Mr. Bradford's son. Franklin set for Perth Amboy, New
Jersey, landed on the island after a drenching and turbulent experience on the
boat. Franklin experienced a fever, but drank much cold water and headed to
Philadelphia on foot, stopping by at Dr. Brown's inn, an old lady's home, and
finally Market Street wharf, where he meets Mr. Read and attended his Meeting
House of the Quakers in the market. Therefore, although Franklin arrived in
Philadelphia with little money, no job, and no place to live, he was not afraid to
find his own way to get the printing job and to use any means possible to make
ends meet.
2. Franklin emphasizes the importance of self-reliance because he believes
that the American spirit of individualism and freedom will drive the American
people to be hardworking, determined, and resilient. Self-reliance was
particularly important for Franklin because, when he faced the difficult situation
of having little money, no job, and no place to live, he did not succumb to
negativity and give up. Instead, he relied on his social and business skills to
get a printing job with another rival printer Keimer and establish his own
printing business in Philadelphia after learning English printing methods in
England.
3. Self-reliance is central to the "American dream" because the ability
to be independent and think on our own allows us to be proactive in finding our
own opportunities (new jobs) and to be creative in our pursuit for success and
happiness in America. By relying on ourselves, we are more responsible, have
more control of our lives, and ultimate develop a sense of resiliency and
creativity to help us achieve success and happiness.
D. Thus, Franklin's Autobiography greatly contributes to the concept of the
"American dream" because it focuses on the ideas of self-reliance, determination, and
perseverance.