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Sherrie Voss Matthews, UT Health Science Center San Antonio Sherri Hildebrandt, Freelance Editor John Braun, Vanguard Group Proofreading: Catch mistakes before they cause a crisis SomeCards

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Sherrie Voss Matthews, UT Health Science Center San Antonio

Sherri Hildebrandt, Freelance Editor

John Braun, Vanguard Group

Proofreading: Catch mistakes before they cause a crisis

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What is proofreading?

✤ It isn’t editing. Not exactly. It is more detail-oriented, and often you have less time to complete this task.

✤ You should take in every aspect. Give the project a closer look. That includes:

• Design• Graphics and crops• White space• Spelling• Punctuation• All details: Look EVERYWHERE!

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What do you proof?

✤ Printed copy

✤ TV screens

✤ Promotional material

✤ Social media: posts, tweets, websites, online polls

✤ Books, magazines, newspapers

✤ Others?

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Common mistakes

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Check your hyphens.

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Tom Tracy, senior vice president of Brokerage Services at Northmarq Cushman & Wakefield, said the park attracts the regional offices of Fortune 50 companies and “top-of- the-line local companies.”

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Where is the mistake?Can you see what might cause criticism?

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Burning your brand, one mistake (or more) at a time

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Bad design = confusion

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Spell check

will not

catch this one!

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Are your eyes playing tricks?

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Are your eyes playing tricks?

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Where in the world?

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Simple things we missed

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Remember this flick?

Justin and Mila would

probably prefer you forget it.

But the double entendre matters.

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Is it an error? (Or a balk?)

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Watch the copy-paste method

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Know your apostrophes

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Math matters

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Math matters

✤ Math tends to intimidate us, so it helps to learn a little about the math involved. (Danica McKellar’s books are great.)

✤ Everyone should learn basic percentages.

✤ Sports: Baseball magic numbers, more percentages (shooting, hitting)

✤ Business: Compound interest

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What proof is your bourbon? 45% = 90 proof 45% 42% = 84 proof -42% That’s 6 proof points and 3 percentage points fewer than before

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This is a table that purports to have four calculations.

The designer imported the wrong numbers into the middle column, so they’re all wrong.

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This is a table that purports to have four calculations.

The designer imported the wrong numbers into the middle column, so they’re all wrong.

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Compound interest at a glanceThe formula looks complicated …

Future value = Present value times (1 + interest rate) raised to the power of the number of years

or FV = PV(1 + i)n

... But really there are just two scenarios to worry about: changing the investment and changing time.

Do the math

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Compound interest at a glanceIf you change the amount you invest:

FV = PV(1 + i)n

… then (1 + i)n is just a number. So we haveFV = PV (some number)

Do the math

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Compound interest at a glanceFV = PV (some number)

These two numbers move together. For example, if one doubles, the other doubles too.

Do the math

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Compound interest at a glanceIf you change the time you invest …

FV = PV(1 + i)n

… then future value changes exponentially. If you double the length of time you invest, future value more than

doubles.

Do the math

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Compound interest at a glance

It boils down to:Am I changing the money?

The yield increases proportionally.

Am I changing time? The yield increases more than proportionally.

Do the math

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Compounding can make a difference when you save over the long term. For example, a $1,000 investment, growing at an average rate of 8% per year, could compound to $1,469 in five years and $2,159 in ten years!

Lots of numbers, but what are we changing?

… could compound to $1,469 in five years and $2,159 in ten years!

Sometimes we get it right

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Compounding can make a difference when you save over the long term. For example, a $1,000 investment, growing at an average rate of 8% per year, could compound to $1,469 in five years and $2,159 in ten years!

Lots of numbers, but what are we changing?

… could compound to $1,469 in five years and $2,159 in ten years!

Time!

Sometimes we get it right

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Compounding can make a difference when you save over the long term. For example, a $1,000 investment, growing at an average rate of 8% per year, could compound to $1,469 in five years and $2,159 in ten years!

✤Change in first five years: $1,469 - $1,000 = $469.✤Change in next five years: $2,159 - $1,469 = $690.

Time makes things grow faster than you’d expect.

Sometimes we get it right

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Let’s look at Jim and Joe, both of whom earn $25,000.✤Jim contributes 3% to the plan and receives a company

contribution of 2% for a total contribution of 5%. Over 20 years Jim would accumulate close to $100,000.

✤Joe contributes 6% to the plan and receives a company contribution of 3.5% for a total contribution of 9.5%. Over 20 years Joe would accumulate about $150,000.

This hypothetical example assumes a return of 8% and does not represent the return on any particular investment.

What changes? The contribution.

Sometimes we get it wrong

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Let’s look at Jim and Joe, both of whom earn $25,000.✤Jim contributes 3% to the plan and receives a company

contribution of 2% for a total contribution of 5%. Over 20 years Jim would accumulate close to $100,000.

✤Joe contributes 6% to the plan and receives a company contribution of 3.5% for a total contribution of 9.5%. Over 20 years Joe would accumulate about $150,000.

Joe’s contributing almost twice as much as Jim, but

Sometimes we get it wrong

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Let’s look at Jim and Joe, both of whom earn $25,000.✤Jim contributes 3% to the plan and receives a company

contribution of 2% for a total contribution of 5%. Over 20 years Jim would accumulate close to $100,000.

✤Joe contributes 6% to the plan and receives a company contribution of 3.5% for a total contribution of 9.5%. Over 20 years Joe would accumulate about $150,000.

Joe’s contributing almost twice as much as Jim, but

The real numbers should be $60,000 and $110,000.

Sometimes we get it wrong

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Why you need a dirty mind.

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Stare carefully. . .

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We’ve moved beyond print

✤ Web: Do the links work? Are there links? Did we spell the headline right? Did we spell everything else correctly?

✤ Social media: Did we link to the correct image? Did we use the correct short url? Did we spell everything correctly in the tweet or post?

✤ Video: Are the transitions smooth? Does this make sense? Does it autoplay? Should it autoplay? Did I spell everything correctly?

✤ Promotional materials: Does the item work? Will it be appropriate to the audience? Did I spell everything correctly?

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Social media messes

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Make sure you don’t

pre-program your social

media content so far ahead that your celebrity endorses

something from

beyond the grave.

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Go Panthers. My alma mater for my master’s degree.

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Have the mind of a 12-year-old boy as you write those hashtags. #morethan #onemeaning

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Know your memes.

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Horrible juxtapositions

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Educate younger staff members

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Tips and tricks learned over time

✤ Take nothing for granted.✤ Designers and writers can miss the obvious as well as the subtle.✤ Don’t trust Word’s spell and grammar check functions. ✤ Pay attention to ALL of your document (page numbers, subheads,

kickers, links, photos, urls).✤ Don’t embarrass your publication.✤ Don’t embarrass your sources.✤ Have a sense of your publication’s style.

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Tips and tricks learned over time

✤ Your co-workers have eyes. Use them.

✤ Don’t be afraid to speak up. If you see something that is outright wrong, or something that could cause a kerfuffle in the public eye, say something. Your job is to try to fix it.

✤ Read in reverse. Seye ruoy nwod swols ti. Seriously, it makes you think harder about each individual word and component.

✤ Know your weaknesses. Know where you are likely to miss something. Program big goof words into spell check, like pubic and univeristy or universtiy.

✤ Know your experts. The people in your office who are trivia geeks. The admin who catches every typo. These are your experts and they are your friends.

✤ Listen to the voice in your head. Check (and ask for help) first.

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Nothing I do professionally today, or perhaps have done all year, is as important as what I just did:

Fixed a typo in a woman's name, so that Cynthia is spelled with a “Y” and not a “U.”

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The devil is always in the details.Check. Always.

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Special thanks to Charles Apple, James Benavides, John Braun, Kirsten Efird, Connor Voss, Lynn Gosnell, Sherri Hildebrandt, Carol Cummings, Sue Kies, Greg Matthews, Caroline Matthews, Rebecca Luther, David McKay Wilson, Melody Sanders, Jess Huegel, Satoshi Toyoshima, Kim Kavin, Mike Schollenberger, Jennifer Snodgrass, Tristan Davies, Gina Lamb, Gawker Media, Poynter.org, JimRomenesko.com, and The Huffington Post for their sharp eyes and blooper contributions.