Academic Writing Skills 1

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Study Writing skills – I 16 – Nov – 2008, Sunday Writing skills for academic purpose Liz Hamp-Lyons & Ben Heasley Pub: CUP 16/Nov/2008, Sun KSV M.Phil. - D.P.Barad

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Study Writing skills – I16 – Nov – 2008, Sunday

Writing skills for academic purposeLiz Hamp-Lyons & Ben Heasley

Pub: CUP

16/Nov/2008, Sun KSV M.Phil. - D.P.Barad

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• Write a para in 100-150 words. • ‘how M.Phil. will help you? • ‘Introductory para of your dissertation’• Make use of pin page.• You can write on:– Degree for monetary gain, i.e. increment in salary– Necessity as advanced degree to secure / job

safety.– Develop academic skills (viz. translation, CALL,

research aptitude…)– Any other …

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Academic Writing processes

• Our aim in this study is to:1.Introducing the idea that writing is a set of

processes.2. Showing how to distinguish between

academic and personal styles of writing.3.Looking at the grammar of academic

discourse.4.Practicing visualizing text as a pre-writing

step.

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Thinking about writing processes:

1. When you write an important text, do you make more than one draft?

2. If option is given, do you prefer to write on paper or use a computer? Have you ever asked yourself why?

3. What do you do before you start writing?4. How do you start writing? Do you begin at ‘the

beginning’ or jump in wherever you have some ideas? Do you think one approach is better than another?

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5. What do you do while you are writing? Do you stop and think? Do you ever go back to the beginning and start again?

6. When you finish your first complete draft, what do you do next?

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Discuss answers with your friends…

• Remember, there are no correct answers, only sensible or thoughtless ones. Freely discuss all views.

• Would your answer be same for writing in your own language?

• Objective of this questionnaire: to capture thinking about something in order to talk clearly about it later.

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Write again …

• Prepare final draft of ‘how M.Phil. will help you? Or ‘Introductory para of your dissertation’.

• Write your name and submit pages to your facilitator for evaluation.

• You can also email me the same write-up later on: [email protected]

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What is academic writing?

• There are different kinds of academic writing in There are different kinds of academic writing in English. Some of these differences arise from English. Some of these differences arise from the different disciplines and the ways in which the different disciplines and the ways in which they create and share knowledge; some relate they create and share knowledge; some relate to the audience (reader); and some to the use of to the audience (reader); and some to the use of which the text will be put.which the text will be put.

• The rules and definitions are very complicated.The rules and definitions are very complicated.• Yet we can easily recognize the difference Yet we can easily recognize the difference

between informal and formal (academic) between informal and formal (academic) writing.writing.

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Recognizing academic writing

• Read:– Linguists were and remain convinced by Noam

Chomsky of the Massachusetts Institute of Technology, who discovered that however disparate human languages seem, all share a common, basic structure, seemingly hardwired into the brain.

* Identify three features of this sentence that you think are academic.

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• Read– The way you speak says a lot about you.

• Identify three features of this sentence that seem non-academic to you.

• Discuss with your partner…. • Let us see the answers …

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Features of academic and non-academic writings

• In first sentence:– Complex sentence– Serious subject– Reference to academics, ‘linguists’ and ‘Noam

Chomsky of …’– Use of passive voice ‘Linguists were and remain

convinced by N.Chomsky …’– Shows truth status of statement, ‘seemingly hardwired into the brain’.

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• In second sentence:– Vague vocabulary, such as ‘way’, ‘say’ and ‘a lot’ –

lack of precision.– Directly addressing the reader, ‘you’ –

conversational style– Simple sentence structure.

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Levels of formality in academic and non-academic writing

Academic Non-AcademicReader Academics Family & friends

Content Serious thought conversational

Style Complex sentences showing considerable variety in construction

Mostly simple and compound sentences joined by conjunctions such as and or but

Organization Clear and well planned

Less likely to be as clear and as organized

Grammar Likely to be error free

May not always use complete sentences

Vocabulary Technical and academic language used accurately

Use of short forms, idioms and slang

After distinguishing some features of academic and non-academic writing, let us now recognize levels of formality

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Read the following sentences and tick A(academic) or N(non-academic)

Sentences A N Notes

I couldn’t finish the interview on time.

The initial tests were completed and the results analyzed by June 2008.

I’d like to start by drawing your attention to previous research in this area.

In the 1990s, some researchers started to point out the problems with this theory.

He agreed with me that this procedure didn’t make much sense.

We’ll repeat the test sometime next year.

While it is still too early to draw firm conclusions from the data, preliminary analysis suggests the following trends are present.

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Check your answers: compare and evaluate

Sentences A N Notes

I couldn’t finish … N Use of “I”; and short form, ‘couldn’t’

The initial tests … A Use of passive voice; ‘were completed; use of precise vocab, ‘initial’

I’d like to start … N Use of ‘I’ and ‘Your’; short form ‘I’d’

In the 1990s, some… N In an academic work we would expect some bibliographic references after ‘some researchers’

He agreed with me … N Use of ‘me’; short forms; vague vocab, ‘much sense’

We’ll repeat … N Use of short form; ‘We’ll; vague

While it is still too early… A Complex sentence

In addition, the research… A Use of connector, ‘In addition’; impersonal style i.e. ‘the research attempts’ rather than ‘I’ or ‘we’16/Nov/2008, Sun KSV MPhil - D.P.Barad