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LITERACY BOOKLET
We have produced this booklet to help you develop and improve all of your writing skills in every subject, not just English.
Abraham DarbyACADEMY
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Welcome to Abraham Darby Academy’s very own Literacy Booklet. We have produced this booklet to help you develop and improve all of your writing skills in every subject, not just English.
1. Introduction
2. Marking code & symbols
2. Useful definitions
3. Sentences
6. Punctuation
7. Spelling
10. Planning your writing
10. Tip Top paragraphing
11. Connectives
13. Text Types
15. Vocabulary
INDEX page
If you want to check how and when to use punctuation or you want to find a spelling strategy, or if you just need general help when planning your writing, you will find this guide useful.
We have included tips and guidance to help you to improve your written communication skills. This will be of benefit to you throughout your time during Key Stage 3 and Key Stage 4 at Abraham Darby Academy and will prepare you for the future beyond your secondary school career.
Therefore it is important that you remember to bring it to school along with your planner every day and that you use it to help you to complete homework, not just in English but again in every subject.
We do hope that you will find this helpful and that you will use this guide in all of your subjects.
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Meaning Margin Symbol
TextSymbol
New paragraph NP //
Capital letter required CL Underlined
letter
Missing or incorrect
punctuationP �
Spelling mistake Sp
Underlined spelling
(corrected once)
missing word or letter
MW or ML ˄
rewording necessary to improve expression
Exp? ͠Copied work C ͠
Add in a point which
you forgot to include
+ +Well written
section - clear and well
expressedJ üü
Marking code & symbols Useful definitionsVowelsa e i o uConsonantsb c d f g h j k l m n p q r s t v w x y zVerbs (doing words)Speaking listening reading writing thinking questioningAdjectives (describing words)neat handwriting clear voice tidy classroom black penNouns (names of things & people)book desk school teacher studentAdverbs (describes verbs)speak clearly listen quietly read fluently write neatlyPronouns (instead of names)he she it they we you I usPreposition (show place)in by under next toConjunctions (joining words)and but becauseOppositesblack/white wet/dry on/offAbbreviationsT.V. = Television Rd. = Roade.g. = for exampleSpeech Marks“Good morning,” announced the teacher.Question Mark“How are you?” Asked the teacher.Exclamation Mark“A superb piece of work! Have 10 vivos!”ApostropheContracting apostrophe:I cannot = I can’tExamples of contracting: It’s = it isPossession apostrophe:Mark’s book (belongs to Mark)
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What is a Sentence?A sentence begins with a capital letter.A sentence ends with a full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.A sentence makes sense.
Types of SentencesA statement is a sentence which gives information. E.g: He is eleven years old.A command is a sentence which gives commands or instruction. E.g: Go home.An exclamation is a sentence which shows emotion or surprise. E.g: Help me!A question is a sentence which asks for information. E.g: What is your name?
Simple SentenceA simple sentence consists of a single main clause. A clause is a part of a sentence that contains a subject and a verb. For example:
â The ballerina danced all night. â Annie watched the television.
Compound SentenceA compound sentence consists of two main clauses joined together by a word like and, but, or. A main clause is one that makes sense on its own.
For example: â Joe likes chocolate drops and he likes toffee. â Peter was late but Chris waited. â I can walk home or I can catch the bus.
Each clause in these sentences makes sense on its own.
Complex SentenceA complex sentence consists of a main clause and a subordinate clause.
For example:Beverley went for a walk, although it was raining.MAIN CLAUSE SUBORDINATE CLAUSEmakes sense on its own does not make sense on its own
Sometimes the subordinate clause can be put at the beginning or in the middle of the sentence and the sentence will still make sense.
For example: â Although it was raining, Beverley went for a walk. â Beverley, although it was raining, went for a walk.
Sentences
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Sentence TipsChange boring verbs
for powerful verbs.The man went down the road
shuffled / sloped / skipped / strolled / stumbled / hopped / limped / raced / ran / sprinted /
Add adjectives to describe nouns.
The tall, bearded man went down the long road.
The tired, lonely man shuffled down the dusty road.
Add ‘ly’ words (adverbs) to describe how the man went.
The man went slowly down the road.Slowly, the man went down the road.
adverbs are mobile words - they can move about in the sentence.
The man went down the road, slowly.
Add adverbials about when and where.
When? Last night, the man went down the road.
Where? The man shouted in the street.
Create Suspense!Use adverbs to begin sentences.
Silently, it edged its way towards the door.Carefully, Angela opened the box.
Drop in Clause.They usually start with a ‘wh’ word
The man, who was very angry, went down the road.
Start your sentence with an ing word.
Sprinting down the road the man tripped and fell.
Laughing out loud, John finally understood the joke.
Stumbling across the floor Jill looked
Create Suspense!Hide the subject.
Something edged its way towards the door of the cottage.
Somebody or something crept inside the dark cave.
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Give your characters feelings by using another word for ‘said,’
an adverb and an action.“No,” said David, could be written as...
“No,” screamed David angrily, as he wiped away the tears from his face and ran into his
bedroom.
Drop in a clause!Show how your character is feeling...
The man, who was very sad, walked quietly away.
The girl, with tears trickling down her face, stumbled up the stairs.
Create suspense!Use short sentences.
Sam edged his way towards the door of the house. He stopped.
Cathy suddenly appeared in the room. A door banged. Cathy jumped. Nothing.
Create suspense!Ask the reader a question.
Why did it have to happen to me?Carefully, Angela crept inside and peered into the dark cave. What was inside? Why
was her heart beating so fast?
Begin your sentences in different ways.
Avoid using ‘one day’ or ‘then’.
Before long / To their surprise / As they arrived they could / At the moment /
Unfortunately / While they waited / It was too late to do anything so / Whenever John
Powerful verbs for dialogue ( instead of said )muttered / whispered / shouted / groaned / sulked / asked / questioned / demanded /
ordered / cried / stuttered / called / smiled / laughed / screamed / spluttered / grumbled / exclaimed / replied / answered / guessed /
yelled / suggested / protested
Use Adverbs to add information about the
verbs.moodily / nastily / loudly / quietly / softly
/ stubbornly / thoughtfully / honestly /hopefully / stupidly / cheerfully/ noisily /
helpfully / lazily / angrily / icily / recklessly
Use phrases which move time on in a story.A few minutes later / The next morning / A short while later / The following day / One
week later / Immediately after / Next moment / Some time later / That night
Sentence Tips
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What strategy can I use to spell this word?
Try it out.
Does it look
right?
Look-say-
cover-write-
check
Can I break it down into
syllables or phonem
es? E.G
. ad-ver-tise-m
ent Is there a spelling rule
that I should use?
E.g -i before -e except after –c
achieve, ceiling
Is there another word I
can spell that would help
me?
Definite, finite, finish
Invent a mnemonic to
help me
E.G. A
ccommodation
=cosy cottages;
magnificent mansions
Necessary= 1 collar, 2
socks
Words all
linked to place: W
here, here, there
Is there a root word I can spell, then add the correct beginning and ending? E.G. dis+satisfy=dissatisfy dis+satisfi+ed=dissatisfied
Look for words within words: Business – bus in ess Separate – there’s a rat in separate
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Spelling Strategies
Never
Eat
Cakes
Eat
Salmon
Sandwiches
And
Remain
Young
Word Within a Word
Sep a rat e
Spell Speaking
Look Cover Write CheckLearn your spellings in five stages:
1. Write down the correct spelling of the word
2. Look at the word and say it aloud
3. Cover the word
4. Write down the word again
5. Check that you have spelt the word correctly
Mnemonics
Wed nes day
Bus in ess
Cup board
Big
Elephants
Can
Always
Understand
Small
Elephants
You are best at learning words that you have made an effort to understand. A good way to understand a word is to break it into syllables. Practise each short part and then the whole word.
dis-ap-pear-ing
tra-di-tion-al
After you break apart a word, ask yourself: How is this word like other words I know? Spelling the word traditional may make you think of spelling functional and national. Finding patterns among words is one of the best ways to learn spelling.
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Spelling - HomophonesHomophones are words which sound the same. They have different spellings and different meanings. For example:
â The sun set over the ocean â The son gave his father a card
Other examples of homophones are:
witch whichstare stairhair harehour ourmeddle medaldeer dear
You can use a dictionary to find out the correct spellings and the correct meanings.
Nouns which take a new form in the pluralSome nouns have a completely different plural form.
â One child….many children â One person….many people â One mouse….many mice
Homonyms are words which sound the same and are spelt the same, but have different meanings. For example:
â The conductor will bow to the audience
â The captain stood on the bow of the boat
Other examples of homonyms are:
iron (ironing) iron (metal)jumper (clothes) jumper (person who jumps)present (gift) present (here, now)will (resolve) will (legacy)
Again, your dictionary will tell you the different meanings of any word that might have more than one definition.
Spelling - Homonyms
Spelling -Singular Pluralknife knivesgoose geesediary diariesradio radiosdeer deerglass glassespotato potatoeswitch witchesleaf leaveslife liveshammer hammerspiano pianostooth teethbaby babiesbreak breakschild childrenhero heroescity citieshandbag handbagslady ladiessheep sheepmemory memories
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Planning your writing
Spider Diagram
Flow Diagram
Argue
Compare
Topic
forforforfor
againstagainstagainstagainst
similaritiesor
differencesIdea 1 Idea 2
Tip Top Paragraphs
TiPToPTimeChange paragraph when the writing changes from one to another. E.g. Morning and then evening or in the past and then the future.
TopicChange paragraph when you change from one topic or point to another.
PlaceChange paragraph when you start talking about a different place. E.g. On the beach and then on the ship.
PersonChange paragraph when you change from one speaker to another, when writing out speech.
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Connectives for...
Giving an example
for examplefor instancesuch asas revealed byin the case ofas shown by
Changing the direction of your text
yetdespitehoweverexceptunlessalthough
Showing similarities
similarlymoreoverlikewiseequallyas withjust as
Explaining cause and effect
becauseconsequentlyowing toas a result ofthanks totherefore
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Defining timefirstlynextthenmeanwhileafterin conclusioneventuallyfinally
Making something stand outabove allmost importantlynoticeablyin particularespeciallyindeed
Showing differences
unlikeon the other handwhereasalternativelyinstead ofhowever
Adding on further information
in additionfurthermoreas well asalsomoreoverbesides
Connectives for...
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Text type:
DISCUSSION• presents arguments from different
points of view
• starts each paragraph with a topicsentence stating the argument andgives facts/examples to support it
• uses the present tense: It is clear that…• uses impersonal language: There are
many arguments for instead of: I amgoing to argue
• may use sub-headings
found in non-fiction books, school essays, answers to exam questions
Examples
Useful connectiveshowever; therefore; as a result; because; despite this; although; apart from; yet; compared with; also;since; nevertheless; some people say; on the other hand; possibly; finally; in conclusion; overall
National Basic Skills Strategy for Wales
The Basic Skills Agency on behalf of the Welsh Assembly Government
The issue
Conclusion
Different points of
view
Topic sentence
There are many arguments for and against building a supermarket onPenvale Common.
Economic Impact:Shops near the common might close because they cannot competewith the low prices of food in the supermarket…
On the other hand, if the supermarket is built, people from the smallervillages would be better off in a number of ways. They would not haveto travel such long distances to do their shopping. They would also payless money for their food. Finally there would be 50 new full-time and50 part-time jobs at the supermarket which would therefore benefit thecommunity, especially young mothers who would like to work part-time.
Overall, from the economic point of view, there seem to be strongarguments in favour of building the supermarket.
Text Types
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Text type:
INFORMATION• tells us how things are, or how things
were• deals with facts, not opinions• organises facts into categories• is clearly written in fairly simple
sentences
• uses paragraphs and sub-headings• uses technical terms• uses the present tense: is, are (except for
events in history)• starts from the big and general and works
down to the detailed and particular
found in information books/encyclopaedias and web-sites,
Examples
Useful connectives[Cause] as a result; consequently; since; as long as; whenever; because; as; therefore; eventually
[Compare/Contrast] in the same way; compared with; similarly; but; however; despite this; apartfrom; yet; nevertheless; instead
Present tense How things wereVolcanoesVolcanoes are generally grouped into four main types: cinder cones, composite volcanoes, lava domes and shieldvolcanoes
1. Cinder ConesCinder cones are formedfrom blobs (‘cinders’) of congealedlava ejected from a single opening.These form a pile…
In Tudor times rich people ate mostly meat and bread and very few vegetables.
Sikhism is a major world religion
The Sikh religion began with the teachings of ten teachers, called Gurus
The first Guru was Guru Nanak
Guru Nanak was born in 1469 into a Hindu family
Sub-heading
Starts from the big and
works down to the detail
National Basic Skills Strategy for Wales
The Basic Skills Agency on behalf of the Welsh Assembly Government
Text type:
INSTRUCTIONS• tells us how to do things
• starts with the goal or purpose
• gives a list of things needed
• sets out steps in time order
• uses bullet points or numbers
• often uses one sentence for each step• often starts each step with a verb:
Place, Add, Pour• uses adverbs to make things clearer:
tightly, carefully• sometimes uses diagrams or pictures
found in recipes, leaflets, manuals, text-books
Examples
Useful connectives[Time/Sequence] first; then; before; next; gradually; meanwhile; once; after; when; while; finally
[Add] and; as well as; also; too; again; in addition
Goal or purpose
National Basic Skills Strategy for Wales
The Basic Skills Agency on behalf of the Welsh Assembly Government
How to make a banana smoothieYou need:1 banana2-3 handfuls of your favourite fruit1 pint glass of ice285 ml single creamA liquidiser2 cocktail glasses
• Place the banana and chosen fruit into a liquidiser
• Whizz for 30 seconds• Add ice and cream• Place lid back tightly• Pulse the liquidiser a couple of times on and off, to
break up the ice• Whizz until the liquid is semi-slushy, like a milkshake• Pour carefully into the two glasses
Writing and sending a text message1. Press Menu in standby mode, then
choose Messages and Write message
2. Write your message. By pressing Optionsyou can access functions to help you write the message
3. When the message is complete, press Optionsto access functions to help you send the message
4. Choose Send, then key in the phone number and press OK
Steps in time order
Verbs at the start ofsentences
Text type:
EXPLANATION• tells us how or why something happens• uses paragraphs to give different
reasons or different steps in the process• uses the present tense: is, are (except
for events in history)• uses an impersonal style
• uses passives: are destroyed, is formed
• focuses on cause and effect
• uses technical words terms and say whatthey mean
• sometimes has diagrams
found in text-books, guides and manuals, history books
Examples
Useful connectives[Time] first; then; next; gradually; meanwhile; once; after; when; while; finally
[Cause] because; therefore; as a result; so; by; consequently
[Compare] on the other hand; although; however; compared with; unlike
[Add] and; as well as; also; in addition; what is more
National Basic Skills Strategy for Wales
The Basic Skills Agency on behalf of the Welsh Assembly Government
The seeds of any weeds in the compost are destroyed because of the high temperatures which develop as the materials decompose.
Volcanoes are formed when magma inside the Earth’supper mantle works its way to the surface. At thesurface it erupts to form lava flows and ash deposits.Once lava and/or ash is piled up around the vent ayoung volcano is formed
A lever is a bar that pivots, or turns, against a point known as the fulcrum to lift a load. Levers help make work easier by reducing the force needed to move a load over a distance.
Cause andeffect
Technical termPassive
Text type:
PERSUASION• puts the case for one point of view• often starts by stating the point of view• gives arguments to support • may use different fonts and pictures to
get attention• uses persuasive tricks such as shock
tactics, humour, repetition, questions to the reader
• uses persuader words (surely, clearly)
• uses ‘strong’ words (corrupt;underhand; outstanding)
• mostly uses the present tense
• uses a mixture of long and shortsentences
found in leaflets, posters, speeches, newspaper editorials and letters,advertisements
Examples
Useful connectivesClearly; surely; obviously; unfortunately; naturally; not only; in particular; above all; especially; as aresult; of course; because; it seems likely; in other words; as shown by; in my view/opinion
National Basic Skills Strategy for Wales
The Basic Skills Agency on behalf of the Welsh Assembly Government
Point of view
Supporting point of view
Question to the reader
Strongconcludingstatement
Council Condemns CommonThe Council has agreed a plan to build a supermarket and petrol station on PenvaleCommon, totally destroying a local beauty spot. This outrageous plan must be stopped.
Residents of Penvale and of neighbouring villages regularly walk andpicnic on the common enjoying the peace and natural surroundings.What is more important – people or profit?
Clearly, this question points at what is wrong with localgovernment in this area – it is sly, underhand
and corrupt! Surely, no sensible person could want to see an area of outstanding natural
beauty turned into a petrol station!
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Vocabulary
Alternative Vocabulary
meander hike
saunter trudge stroll amble dawdle toddle shuffle troop march plod
Instead of walk
scamper rush jog
gallop whizz dash bolt race speed sprint hasten scurry
Instead of run
report advise explain declare notify express proclaim inform instruct utter state
mention
Instead of tell
create assemble fashion produce generate
build prepare
construct fabricate
form compose arrange
Instead of make
A wonderful collection of winning words
Alternative Vocabulary
excellent amazing
wonderful pleasant super
outstanding fantastic terrific
splendid marvellous exceptional
brilliant
Instead of good
terrible awful lousy
unpleasant dreadful nasty
horrendous disagreeable
wretched horrible wicked
evil
Instead of bad
ecstatic cheerful pleased elated thrilled
overjoyed delighted
joyful content
glad jovial
amused
Instead of happy
unhappy gloomy tearful upset
downcast sombre
depressed down
sorrowful forlorn
miserable glum
Instead of sad
A wonderful collection of winning words
Instead of said
shouted
ranted
moaned
chuckled
barked
whinged cried
exclaimed
sighed
laughed
growled
whimpered
bellowed
sobbed
grunted
wept
giggled
bawled screamed
announced cackled
howled
sniggered
chattered
uttered whispered yawned
snivelled
wailed
murmured
joked
yelled
grumbled
called
groaned
complained muttered