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Kayleigh Willeroy’s
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
11 May 2014
Eighth Grade Writing Portfolio
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Table of Contents:
Pg. 1-Cover Page Pg. 18-Personal Choice 1/ Reality Check
Pg. 2-Table of Contents Pg. 19-Personal Choice 1/ Reality Cont.
Pg. 3-Persuasive/ Healthier School lunches Pg. 20-Personal Choice 2/ Nothing
Pg. 4-Persuasive/ Healthier School lunches cont. Pg. 21-Personal Choice 3/ Spanish Weather
Pg. 5-Persuasive Reflection Pg. 22-Personal Choice 4/ Science Fair Org.
Pg. 6-Informational/ Acting as a career choice Pg. 23-Personal Choice 4/ Science F. cont.
Pg. 7-Informational/ Acting as a career choice cont. Pg. 24-Per. Ch.5/ Never in a Million Years
Pg. 8-Informational/ Acting as a c. choice cont.2 Pg. 25-Personal Choice 6/ Gov. Shut Down
Pg. 9-Informational Reflection Pg. 26-Personal Choice Writing Reflection
Pg. 10-Narrative/ Zach Pg. 27-Upgrade 1
Pg. 11-Narrative/ Zach cont. Pg. 28-Upgrade 1 cont.
Pg. 12-Narrative Reflection Pg. 29-Upgrade 1 cont.
Pg. 13- Literary Response/ Monica Lin Pg. 30-Upgrade 1 cont.
Pg. 14-Literary Response Reflection Pg. 31-Yearbook Upgrade Reflection
Pg. 15-Subjunctive Mood Poem/ Friends are trees Pg. 32- Upgrade 2
Pg. 16-Personal Choice Poem/ Broken Toys Pg. 34- Digital Upgrade Reflection
Pg. 17- Poetry Reflection Pg. 35- Feedback
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
9 May 2014
Adding more healthy choices to school lunches.
Studies show that prison lunches are often significantly healthier than school lunches.
This is sad considering America’s criminals are receiving better food than America’s students.
By changing the menu at schools and adding healthier options we can change problems like
diabetes in children and childhood obesity. Of course this will be a rigorous process but once
completed we can turn the horrid statistics around.
I am aware that schools receive free food from the government to help feed students.
Many of these prepackaged frozen meals contain countless amounts of preservatives that can be
harmful to the human body. If we raised the prices on lunches this would help cover the cost of
buying organic and fresh foods. Eliminating preservatives.
Another way to help the school be able to purchase healthier foods is fundraisers. The
schools could hold races or runs to help make money. Students could also sell items to make
money for the schools.
If schools bought less food that would help reduce the cost as well. Most of the time
when a student purchases lunch they have two different options. Students don’t always like one
of these options and waste food in turn wasting money. If the school lets the student have more
choices students will eat what they pick out. Wasting less money.
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School lunches are a serious problem especially in America’s schools. If we can change
this by purchasing healthier food items why don’t we! Let’s make a difference
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
10 May 2014
I picked this specific topic of school lunches because, I truly believe that this is an
epidemic in our schools. This paper helped me research the topic more closely. I learned that
making changes to better school lunches would be expensive and rigorous however, there are
still ways. I also learned the statistic that prisoners often eat healthier than students.
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
9 September 2013
The career cluster that I chose this fine arts, my specific career is acting.
In the career of acting you do a variety of different things. You need lots of skills continue
into the world of acting. I was surprised by the list of activities that you might encounter while
completing his career! Being able to complete many of these skills will be very helpful to you
receiving a role in the television or movie industry. Acting may look easy but not everything is
as it seems to be!
Here are some tasks that you might encounter, thinking creatively, making decisions and
solving problems, memorizing countless lines, organize, plan and privatize work, develop and
build teams. The list continues on and on these are just a few of the tasks you come to face to
face with on a daily basis. Here are some other activities that you will complete; perform
activities that use the whole body, coordinate the work and activities of others, develop goals and
strategies, communicate with supervisors and peers, establish relationships, perform for the
public and, get information needed to complete the assigned activity.
I choose acting for many reasons. One of the reason is I used to perform in drama club and I
loved it more than anything. Unfortunately, I moved to a different school and they didn't offer
such programs. I also enjoy working with others which is a huge part of acting. Overall I love
acting, I love being on stage in front of large groups and being portray someone else. The
average pay for an actor or actress varies. And Georgia GCIS categorized the pay into three
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separate tiers, starting is about $12.39 an hour and medium is 16.03 hourly. What is even more
surprising is the top tier at $36.96 hourly!
The future job outlook for acting is semi high in the state of Georgia but unfortunately,
decreases in other states. The reason I believe that the number of job increased is due to the fact
that most movies are filmed in Georgia.
There are several high school courses recommended. Some of these courses are chorus,
dance, drama, stagecraft and, public speaking. Some actors or actresses are self-employed. If that
is the case then you should also take accounting, entrepreneurship and, introduction to business.
The three colleges that would be recommended for my career of acting are as follows
University of Georgia, California State University and Ohio State University. They all offer
programs in the career of acting. All three of these colleges also offer at least a bachelors and
masters degree in this field.
The University of Georgia only accepts students with a 2.0 GPA, a 28 on the ACT, and a SAT
score of reading- 608, math- 617 and, writing- 607. California State University only requires a
2.0 GPA and an ACT score of 21. Ohio State University requires a 2.5 GPA.
My favorite college out of my options is University of Georgia because here I could receive
the Hope scholarship and receive the in-state tuition price instead of the out of state tuition price
which is significantly higher. It's also closer to home so I won't have to make tons of new
friends! The things they look for when deciding whether not to except applicants is as follows,
high school GPA, difficulty of high school courses, standardized test scores, high school rank,
application essay and, talent or ability.
As funding and scholarships proceed, I plan on getting a 3.0 GPA and use the Hope
scholarship. In addition to the Hope scholarship I found an organization called SAG which
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awards up to $40,000 and money to go toward my college fund. If all else fails I plan on
applying for financial aid and taking a loan out from the bank!
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
10 May 2014
I competed this paper for career management, this course was one of my favorite middle
school classes. This was my “final paper” for his class and I am very happy with it. I learned
more about my plan for college. By having to research this project I learned about a large amount
of colleges that offer different programs.
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
3 January 2014
Zach
Singing in the rain, I danced like I meant it. I was having the time of my life. I figured I
wasn’t going to hold back anymore since I had only two weeks to live. Having a measly twenty
dollars in my pocket, I held my icy cold white fingers over my pants pocket so the rain wouldn’t
dare touch the money my mother had given me. I had received the money from my mom after
radiation to go get a snack from the 7/11 about two blocks away. I know the only reason she ever
gave me money after radiation was so she could have “alone time” with her boyfriend of seven
months even though she told me that I got the money as a treat for going to radiation.
Born to die was playing on the store radio when I entered the musty 7/11 which was
strangely ironic because after all I was going to die soon. The underpaid and un-friendly Indian
man who was always in the store stared at me with his cold hard brown eyes as if the boy with
no hair was going to steal his cheap merchandise.
Knowing my plans to purchase cigarettes were completely futile because my mother
came into this 7/11 often and even though brown eyes probably wouldn’t say anything I wasn’t
going to push my luck. So I calmly but quickly walked over to the dust covered sloppy Slurpee
machine and picked up the largest cup I could muster out of the cup holder then I filled it with
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the Coca-Cola flavor and topped it with some of the cherry flavor since cherry coke is my
absolute favorite. I knew that the Slurpee wouldn’t cover the twenty like the cigarettes did so I
grabbed my favorite food in the world, Doritos. Finally I walked up to the register and set down
my merchandise. As brown eyes rang up my merchandise my head spun and that little voice in
my head who normally urged me not to was telling me to do.
Quickly with a little bit of fear I grabbed the things as he handed me the stuff and when
he asked me the method of payment I sprinted out of the door and heard a faint yelling from the
man who never spoke. However I didn’t stop I didn’t want two. Two weeks was all I had left and
in those two weeks I, Zach am going to create chaos in my little farm town and break society.
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
10 May 2014
I choose to include this piece because, it is some of my favorite work. It shows my great
word choice off and my use of descriptive words and phrases. I wish I could of made it longer I
feel as if this would be a good story.
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
10 May 2014
Quote:
“You said you would teach her how to swim, but instead you were the reason she
drowned”
- Monica Lin
This is one of my absolute poems and poets. I have an ex-stepdad who would always say I can
teach Kayleigh to ride a bicycle and he would. But I would always forget. One day I was riding
my bike down a hill and Trey yells turn but I don’t and I glide straight into a brick wall. I can
relate this poem to him because, when he left it hurt really badly everything he taught me I didn’t
want to do. To be honest he was never a good person but, he did try and I truly believe he always
tried to make me fly even if it was impossible. Most of the time I would just crash and burn.
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
10 May 2014
I love the poem that I choose however, I feel my writing was a little off and at times
didn’t make sense. I feel my connection to the poem was weak and lacking in reasons. It was
difficult for me to explain the connection without going onto a life story!
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
April 30, 2014
Friends are trees.
The branches are your strong friends; they don’t snap easily. They are always there to
comfort you, coddle you. They can protect you. When the wind blows they stay.
Leaves are weak. Some friends are similar to leaves, they are there but, aren’t there when
the wind howls and rain pours. They are fragile and blow away and sometimes never return.
The roots of a tree are the friends that make up you. There is no chance they are ever
leaving.
Without them you wouldn’t be you. They help you grow and learn they nourish you and only are
helpful.
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
12 February 2014
Broken Toys
If you do the same thing over and how could you possibly expect a different outcome?
You can fix a broken toy but, at the end of the day the toy is still broken and is more fragile than
before. You can glue back a precious moment’s ceramic figure but you can still see the cracks.
So why do people give relationships second chances. Why do they try to rekindle or
spark new flames.
Things that get broken in battle will still be broken and the scars will never truly
forgotten even if forgotten.
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
10 May 2014
I love both of my poems. I wish I had written a rhyming poem. I like the second one
especially because, I can connect this to my home life and relationships. My friends are trees
poem I wish I had spent more time on that because I think that the analogy that friends are trees
is a great concept ready to be further explored.
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
8 May 2014
Reality Check
The concrete is cold and I can feel the hard itchy rocks underneath my feet. My eyes are
shut as tight as possible they start to swell from all of the tears. What I just saw changes
absolutely everything. It will change who I am, who I want to be, what I care about, whom I care
about. I will never have great grades again or have many friends. I will shut out the world close
myself of to the pain. I itch my face and my finger traces a deep wound in which there is an
immense amount of dried blood. The wound is still bleeding just a little though. I am not even
worried about it. I normally would be freaking out that there is something unattractive on my
face challenging my beautiful complexion but, I didn't care. My head is pounding like crazy and
I suddenly feel extremely dizzy so I take a seat on the blue bench in the park. The bench was
even colder than my body and it stung as my bare legs made contact with the bench. Causing me
to jump. I look down at my legs and realize little red speckles trickling down to my inner thighs.
Something else must be bleeding I think to myself I take my cold little fingers and firmly grasp
my nose and tilt my head towards the sky but, that makes me even dizzier so I stand up straight
and continue walking. All of a sudden I am awaken from my mindless walking. They are police
sirens and I realize Derrick must have called the police. Derrick is my next door neighbor. He
had never really introduced himself he was quite but waved when I walked by. I didn't think he
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would be the one to call but everyone else is away for spring break. Well mostly everyone accept
for me and this girl 5 blocks down. Let's just say we don't get along. I start walking towards the
sirens. I must have walked really far away because I am past the 7/11 and my mom says that's the
farthest point I can go to when with friends or alone. Oh god mom. MOM I start to scream at the
top of my lungs MOM MOM I continuously shout this over and over and my eyes become
swollen once again and I can't feel my toes. I start to jog and then in to a panicked run. I make it
to my neighborhood stop sign before collapsing in the mud. Then it hits me she is dead.
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
3 March 2014
Nothing
When you see things fail. When you hear things break. When you can feel the
heartlessness in the room. When you can smell the hate. When you can taste the pain. You start
to think to yourself even before you can truly comprehend life (which you never really can)
before you can get a job or live by yourself, you think and feel these strong emotions. You think
some people must be truly blessed to never have to feel emotions like these. You just hope and
pray that you will never have to deal with things like these again.
You are at an age where you can’t do anything or change anything. So you just stand
helplessly. You watch adults make decisions blindlessly that might hurt your future. However,
you still can’t do anything even though what is happening will affect you forever.
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
14 December 2014
Spanish Weather Script
Buenos Dias, damas y caballeros de Espana. Me llamo Kayleigh. Son las cinco en punto de la
manana. Hoy es sabado el catorce de deciembre. Tengo tu pronostico de tiempo.
Que tiempo hace hoy? En Barcelona hace fresco y hace buen tiempo. Tenemos una tempetura
minima de siete y una tempetura maxima de once. Todo el mundo camina el perro in el parque.
Manana es domingo el quince de diecembre. Esta nublado y hace sol. Vamos a tener una
tempetura minima de cinco y una maxima de doce. Necesitas una gafas de sol.
Good Morning, ladies and gentlemen of Spain. My name is Kayleigh. It's five o'clock in the
morning. Today is Saturday the fourteenth of December. I have your forecast.
What’s the weather like today? In Barcelona it's cool and nice weather. We have a minimum of
seventy one and a maximum of eighty. Everybody should walk the dog in the park.
Tomorrow is Sunday the fifteenth of December. It will be cloudy and sunny. We will have a
minimum of 51 and a maximum of 60. You will need sunglasses.
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
3 November 2013
Science Fair Problem/ Solution Organizer
Problem:
Do test subjects find celebrities who have facial measurements that are closest to the golden ratio
to be more pleasing to the eye?
Hypothesis:
Test subjects will find those celebrities whose facial measurements come closest to the golden
ratio to be more attractive.
Procedures:
First I will find four different celebrities two females two males and one of each that I found
unattractive. Then I will measure the celebrities faces for the golden ratio. After doing so I will
gather my test subjects and ask them to rate the celebrities 1-10 10 being the most attractive and
1 being the least attractive. Then I will tally up the results and find whether or not the golden
ratio affects attractiveness.
There are close to none safety risks. I will take precaution by only interviewing test
subjects that I know.
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To analyze my results for testing I will take all four celebrities and add their ratings together the
celebrity with the highest overall score will be the closest person to the golden ratio.
Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
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Seventh Period Language Arts
5 September 2013
Never in a million years
I could tell the minute I got in the door and drop my bag, I wasn't staying she looked at me with
wide eyes "we have rules in this house missy" " yes ma'am" I responded "after you unpack your
belongings come seemingly dining room for meeting" . I finished packing my things into my
new room. The walls were so bare except for a few physics posters. From what I have seen I
don't want to stay there not warm and loving like my counselor had told me while I lived in the
shelter, I trotted downstairs to find dinner and my new mother and father sitting at the plain oak
kitchen table. I look at kitchen and I gaze for some color or some flowers or maybe a little bit of
art but nothing. It was weird because when I lived with my real parents my mom was very
creative she hung things places and she couldn't stand the color brown or black because it would
make everything look dull. The house is so full of life but this one is full of feelings of death and
it kind of reminded me of the day that my parents died. So I for sure was not staying there.
Never in a million years.
Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
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Seventh Period Language Arts
1 October 2013
Government Shut Down
This is bad. Misses Obama is pacing up and down the Obama’s bedroom. “ we have to
fix this, you have to fix this” she says. Thinking about all of non-essentials who aren’t getting
paid some have children. Barack she yells are you listening to me. He just stares at the perfect
meadow painting. “If you aren’t going to do anything we might as well mark you un- essential as
well. Misses Obama is startled by a hurried almost panicked knocks she stops her frenzy and
opens the door. We need the president Misses.
Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
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Seventh Period Language Arts
10 May 2014
My two favorite personal choices would probably be Reality Check and Nothing.
These are my favorite because these are pieces that I spent a lot of time on they are also written
in my free time. In Government Shut down I hope one day to return to the story and tell what
happens after the knock. My Spanish weather script I thought would be and interesting touch to
show some culture. Never In a Million Years is a piece that I wrote at the beginning of the school
year for a quick write and I liked it!
Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
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Seventh Period Language Arts
10 May 2014
Upgrade 1: Yearbook
This photo was taken on the Roswell walking tour.
Vivian and Amber are in the photo. The tour was tons
of fun and gave me a better insight of Roswell during
the civil war.
This photo is of Mintie, Marissa and I. We were at the eighth grade dance!
Which was awesome!
Gina and I were at Mintie’s surprise
party
for her fourteenth birthday which is really the last
day of school.
This photo was taken in Athens, Georgia.
Mintie and I took a “daycation” to go visit campus
and the Botanical Gardens.
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These are some beautiful tuilips from when Mintie and I visited the Botanical
Gardens.
This photo is of Brianna, Camilla and I at
lunch one day this year. This photo is special
serving Brianna and Camilla’s favorite
lunch; pizza, tater tots and frozen fruit cups.
Shoes and more shoes. Flordia was probably
my favorite part of my eighth grade year. This
Gina, Sophie, Mintie and I all ready for Sea
World!
One of my very besties all through middle school.
Her name is Camilla. This photo was taken at target after
getting Starbucks!
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This photo was taken after the awards ceremony.
Mintie and I are strutting down the hallway.
Yay! Scoliosis testing selfies. Left to right:
Kayleigh,
Jordan, Brianna, Camilla and, Desiree.
Lunch Club for the win! Selfies with Mr.
Pracht, Cara , Mintie and, I.
Valentine’s Day was the best with these ladies. Endless love was flawless and
Oreos are the bae!
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Aaron is a beautiful mother! Science class is
so much fun! Anna, Kyle and Cj are laughing too!
Snow apocalypse 2014 was a blast at
Camilla’s house! Hopefully it will snow
again soon! Not!
Flashback to making wishes and memories
with Camilla, Desiree and Brianna!
Oh Marissa! Target Starbucks Selfies!
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Caramel frapee’s at the mall with Camilla!
Why did I have that bow in my hair… gross!
The field trip to Phillips Arena was a lot of
fun! Especially sitting next to these two crazies;
Mintie and Camilla.
The Chattahoochee River is so beautiful. It
is also a great place to de stress from middle
school.
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One of my favorite parts of this year would definitely be gate! Especially
because one of my very best friends were in my group.
Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
10 May 2014
I choose this upgrade because, I love taking pictures of my friends and I. I am so glad that
I am one of those that have a difficult time deleting photos so I would have them for my project.
There is nothing that I would change about this portion of my project. I love it!
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
10 May 2014
Digital Upgrade:
Link:
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
10 May 2014
The reason I choose the digital upgrade for my second upgrade was online resources are
more accessible and can be shared easier. If my computer crashes the internet doesn’t so I will
still have all of my work! I used slide share over live binders because live binders was difficult to
use and you are un able to upload word documents!
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Kayleigh Willeroy
Chaffin
Seventh Period Language Arts
10 May 2014
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