684 Ass 3 Sample Feedback
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684 Assessment 3 Research Task Sample Assessment Criteria and Feedback Sample COMMENTS MARKS r!blem Good identification of a number of problems with the students and written work, with clear connections to your specific teaching context. Expression and written accuracy generally good. "#$% &iterat're Re(ie) Some useful literature relevant to issues involved, with useful sub- sections, though a brief introduction would be useful. A good range of end references, with some helpful recent sources, though you need to be more consistent with AA formatting. $3#*% C!ncl'si!n and Rec!mmendati!ns !our comments were sensible and pertinent, and the brief recommendations you made were carefully considered, though bullet points could have been useful here. $4#*% T!tal Marks 34#+%, O(erall "his was a generally well-argued assignment, which identifies real problems a identifies appropriate solutions. a'l Mercieca
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684 Assessment 3Research Task Sample
Assessment Criteria and Feedback
SampleCOMMENTSMARKS
ProblemGood identification of a number of problems with the students and written work, with clear connections to your specific teaching context. Expression and written accuracy generally good.
7/10
Literature Review Some useful literature relevant to issues involved, with useful sub-sections, though a brief introduction would be useful. A good range of end references, with some helpful recent sources, though you need to be more consistent with APA formatting.
13/20
Conclusion and RecommendationsYour comments were sensible and pertinent, and the brief recommendations you made were carefully considered, though bullet points could have been useful here.
14/20
Total Marks34/50%
OverallThis was a generally well-argued assignment, which identifies real problems and identifies appropriate solutions.Paul Mercieca
