3 月托福写作考前题型串讲

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3 月托福写作考前题型串讲

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托福独立写作三大题型的文章结构

绝对词比较类隐藏 all



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绝对词题目文章结构Newspaper and magazine is the best way to learn about a foreign country.

In twenty years later, printed books will be no longer in existence.

In order for a business to succeed, it must put more money in advertising



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Newspaper and magazine is the best way to learn about a foreign country.

使用结构 1 ：开头： agree主体段 1: the price of newspaper and magazine is low主体段 2: newspaper and magazine introduces all aspects of a foreign country 主体段 3: the introduction in the newspaper and magazine is objective结尾： repeat your position



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结构二：开头： disagree 主体段 1 ： surfing the internet is better 主体段 2 ： watching TV and movies is better主体段 3: travelling to a foreign country is better

Newspaper and magazine is the best way to learn about a foreign country.



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Newspaper and magazine is the best way to learn about a foreign country.结构三：开头： disagree 让步段： for people who do not have

lots of money and time, reading newspaper and magazine is a good way转折段： for people who have lots of money and spare time, travelling is a better way 结尾： repeat your position



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It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a job with a high pay but is easy to lose.

Your job has greater happiness than your social life.

In order to celebrate a major event, it is better to organize a big party with a lot of people than to have a small party where only friends and relatives are invited.

比较级题目文章结构



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It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a job with a high pay but is easy to lose.结构一开头： disagree主体段 1 ： a high job gives us more money

主体段 2 ： a high job which is easy to lose is more challenging

主体段 3 ： even if we lose the job, we can find another job



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It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a job with a high pay but is easy to lose.结构二开头： disagree让步段： for people who live in small cities

or towns, taking a secure job with a low pay is a good choice.

转折段： for people who live in big cities, taking a job with a high salary but is easy to lose is more suitable.

结尾： repeat your position



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隐藏绝对词题目文章结构People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there’s no need for the government to help them.

The professional athletes do not deserve high salaries they get.

The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual.



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People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there’s no need for the government to help them.

结构一开头： Disagree主体段 1: 当人们受到伤害，法律会保护我们的合法权益和利益。主体段 2: 在政府的帮助下，人们可以更好地解决问题。主体段 3: 有些问题是个人解决不了的。比如公共设施：马路，公园等



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结构二开头： disagree让步段： some problems can only be solved by people themselves or with the help form family members, such as emotional problems.转折段： some public problems cannot be solved without the help from the government, such as environmental problems结尾： repeat your position



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独立写作开头对比法引出话题 + 不同观点 + 个人观点The public have not yet reached a concensus as to whether ..... Some people deem that...., while others hold an opposite view. As far as I am concerned, ......



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引出话题替换When it comes to the issue whether…, people’s opinions are divergent on such a controversial issue.

The issue whether…is a topic that is often discussed and opinions differ on this issue.

People have not yet reached an agreement on the issue whether…



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不同观点替换

Some people hold the view that..., whereas others take a different position.

Some people reckon that....., which is refuted by others.



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个人观点替换As far as I am concerned= for my part= Personally speaking

I would like to cherish the view that....

I tend to believe that....



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独立写作结尾In a nutshell, I have to admit that that…,However, the title statement is too absolute for the reason that… Therefore, I do not agree with the title statement.



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开头： The public have not yet reached a concensus as to whether people can solve important by themselves or with the help from their family members. Some people deem that government can do nothing about important problems, while others hold an opposite view. As far as I am concerned, I would like to disagree with the title statement for the following illustration.

让步段： emotional problems can be solved by people themselves 转折段： public problems must be solved by governments

结尾： In a nutshell, I have to admit that some personal problems can be solved on our own or with the help from family members. However, the title statement is too absolute for the reason that some public problems cannot be solved without the government’s help. Therefore, I do not agree with the title statement.



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万能理由—环境Environmental problems—air pollution—why—factories and cars—emission of wasted gases—negative influence—public health (respiratory diseases, lung cancer)—how to solve this problem



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At the present age, one of the most serious environmental problems can be regarded as air pollution. It is the rapid development of economy that gives rise to a larger number of factories and personal cars, which is the primary source of the emission of wasted gases in the air. Exposed into the polluted air, people are more likely to get respiratory diseases, like asthma, and lung cancer. What’s worse is that hardly can we see the blue skies and white clouds over our heads. To guarantee a healthy living environment, it is high time governments took effective measures to alleviate this problem, like limiting the number of personal cars and shutting down factories that damage natural environment. Only in this way can people enjoy a healthy life with cleaner air and blue skies.



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People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there’s no need for the government to help them.It is much easier for parents to raise children now than fifty years ago.Progress is always goodCompared with people who live in urban areas, the people who live in rural areas can take better care of their families. The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual.



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其他高频论据医疗 The importance of education- how to improve education quality—building more schools—facilitates of schools—teachers-trainings



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其他高频论据网络 The position of internet-advantages of internet-improving working efficiency-changing life style(entertainment-shopping)-information collecting- disadvantages of internet- addiction-health-



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综合写作解题方法

综合写作：R : 3 min （ 4 段：总 - 分 - 分 - 分）L : about 2 minW ： 20 minword range: 150-225



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阅读第 1 段：第一句：找阅读要讨论的 topic ( 名词 )

最后一句或倒数第二句：阅读总观点

如何快速获得阅读中的信息



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The cane toad is a large (1.8 kg) amphibian species native to Central and South America. It was deliberately introduced to Australia in 1935 with the expectation that it would protect farmers' crops by eating harmful insects. Unfortunately, the toad multiplied rapidly, and a large cane toad population now threatens small native animals that are not pests. Several measures have been proposed to stop the spread of the cane toad in Australia.

TPO15



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阅读第 2-4 段每段段首句，提出分观点



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转述阅读观点同义词转换主动与被动的转换词性变换原文： houses were used as ceremonial centers People used houses for ceremonies.



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常见的出题形式（一）阅读给出一个理论或假设，列举三个理由支持或驳斥

听力反驳阅读的理由错误或不足以证明，并可能列举其他理由如 TPO5



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三个理由证明建筑的用途1. 住宿，因为外形像公寓楼

1. 不可能住人，因为里面没有足够生火的地方

2. 储存事物，建筑的大小适合

2. 没有发现谷物或者容器的痕迹

3. 用作庆典，因为发现一些可能是用来盛放庆典晚餐的罐子

3. 罐子和其他一些材料都可能只是建筑垃圾



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常见的出题形式（二）阅读提出三个方法或某事物优缺点听力反驳方法可行或不可行 / 优缺点中忽略的因素

如： tpo 15, 26



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阅读提出三个方法阻止蟾蜍扩散1. 建栅栏，曾用栅栏阻止兔子的扩散

1. 对蟾蜍无效，因为卵和小蟾蜍会随水流穿过栅栏（错误的横向类比）

2. 组织志愿者捕捉，很容易能捉到

2. 会伤害本土的，濒临灭绝的青蛙（忽略消极影响）

3. 用病毒，只会伤害蟾蜍，不会伤害其它物种

3. 会影响中南美洲的蟾蜍，进而影响当地生态系统



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