2月22日托福写作考前点题黄舒文

小马公开课 400-663-1986

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2 月 22日托福写作考前点题

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小马公开课 400-663-1986


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小马公开课 400-663-1986


Which do you think is the best way for students to make friends?

a. join a sports team

b. participate in community activities

c. travel

三选一题型

小马公开课 400-663-1986


I think the best way to make friends is to join a sports team.

First and foremost, joining a sports team allows students to make friends with those who share the same interest in sports.

Second, people can detect the strengths and weaknesses of each other when playing sports and thus decide who they would like to befriend.

Finally, physical and mental fitness can be achieved by the company of friends in a sports team.

version-1 一边倒

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优点

5段，每段字数要求不高

传统写法，较有说服力

缺点

时间短，分论点难想，耽误时间

version-1 一边倒

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1. introduction

2. Joining a sports team is the best way to make friends.

benefit (1),,,benefit (2),,,

3. Although community activities and traveling are far from bad, they have some inevitable disadvantages.

4. conclusion

version-2

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All the three options can be the best, and it depends on different groups of people.

For students who enjoy playing the sports, joining the sports team is the best way to make friends.

For students who like to befriend people at different age, participating in the community activities is the most favorable choice.

For students who want to know some foreign friends, they can turn to traveling for enlarging their friend circle.

version-3 分情况讨论

小马公开课 400-663-1986


三选一题目的解法方法一

一边倒，选择 A/B/C 其中一个进行拓展，一般写 3 个分论点， 2个亦可

方法二

选择一个写其好处，另一段写剩下二个的弊端

方法三

分情况讨论，三个都能写

小马公开课 400-663-1986


People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there’s no need for the government to help them. (A>B)version-1 一边倒 three problems that only the government is capable of solving:e.g. law; public transportation; politics; natural disaster; war...

对比型题目

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People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there’s no need for the government to help them. (A>B)

version-2 让步转折，分情况讨论 It depends on what kind of problems people are dealing with.

让步 A>B, especially when it comes to personal issues like career, marriage or school.

转折 B>A, especially in terms of law and public transportation individuals are unable to resolve independently.

对比型题目

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It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a job with a high pay but is easy to lose. (A>B)version-1 一边倒 3 benefits of a secure jobOR: 3 benefits of an unstable job

对比型题目

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It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a job with a high pay but is easy to lose. (A>B)

version-2 分年龄讨论

Admittedly, taking a secure job with a low pay is a better choice than a well-paid job that is easy to lose, especially for senior employees who ususally seek a stable career. (A>B， espeically for...)

However, for young workers in pursuit of more wealth, doing a job that offers high salaries but is easy to lose proves a more favorable decision. (B>A, especially for...)

对比型题目

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Your job has greater happiness than your social life. (A>B)

version-1 一边倒

工作的三个好处

或者：社交生活的三个好处

对比型题目

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Your job has greater happiness than your social life. (A>B)version-2 分情况讨论让步：物质满足和精神成就感方面，工作 >社交转折：解压、娱乐层面看，社交 >工作

对比型题目

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People who have learned many different skills are more likely to succeed than those who focus on learning only one skill.(A>B)version-1 一边倒多项技能的三个好处或者：单项技能的三个好处

对比型题目

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People who have learned many different skills are more likely to succeed than those who focus on learning only one skill.(A>B)

version-2 分不同的职业需求

让步：more skills are better than one skill in some territories

e.g. simultaneous interpreters同声传译， foreign language/professional knowledge/communication/fast learning/physically capable to cope with the pressure

转折： one skill is enough in some fields

e.g. athletes/cooks/artists/...

对比型题目

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It is more important for the government to spend money on new buildings than to preserve historic or traditional buildings and homes.

It is more important for the government to spend money on improving Internet access than on public transportation.

Governments should focus its budgets more on environmental protection than on economic development.

The telephone has greater influence on people’s lives than television has.

Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends of your own age.

对比型题目

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Should the government support artists or should artists support themselves? (A or B，解法同 A>B)

分情况讨论分国家

Developed countries should support artists.

In developing countries artists should support themselves because the government needs to focus on the basic living of citizens in terms of food, clothing, shelter, education and medical services.

对比型题目

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Teaching is harder today than it was in the past. 1. 一边倒，倒现在2. 一边倒，倒过去3.A=B 现在和过去教书都很难4.A=B 现在和过去教书都很简单

今昔对比题目

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Young people are less dependent on their parents today than in the past.

Nowadays young people do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past.

Teachers in the past had a greater influence on their students than teachers do today.

今昔对比题目

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In twenty years’ time, people will lead a more leisurely life. （分年龄）

The effective leader tries to make others feel they have been part of a decision.

In 20 years from now on, students will not use printed books any more.

隐藏 all 题目

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Movies and television programs should present stories in which good people are rewarded and bad people are punished.

Parents should allow children to make mistakes and let them learn from their own mistakes.

Professional athletes, such as football and basketball players, do not deserve the high salaries that they are paid.

The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual.

Younger school children (aged five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and history.

隐藏 all 题目

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Good luck with tomorrow!

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