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WELCOME! Pick up your English binder. Turn to “Tracking My Growth in
Narrative Writing: W73c.” Pull up your personal narrative on the
laptop.
Good News! 3rd hour is leading the English binder challenge! Organized and all in place. 6th – not well organized.5,6,8,9 – Not all binders put away in the proper place!
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SENTENCE VARIETY & SENTENCE PATTERN 4 Sentence pattern 4 – open with an
adverb An adverb:
A word that changes a verb, adjective or another adverb by telling how something is done, when something is done, where something is done, or to what extent something is done.
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NOW FOR THE W73C These adverbs are ALSO transitions!
1. Currently, 10. *Sleepily,2. Immediately, 11. Quickly,3. Recently, 12. Carefully4. Gradually,5. Presently,6. Simultaneously,7. Briefly,8. Finally,9. Suddenly
*Sleepily – may or may not be a transition, but will definitely work for pattern.
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YOUR PEER’S TEXTThe dog was catching up. He bit my ankle while I was climbing up the fence. I finally made it out the stranger’s yard.
…Finally, I made it out of the stranger’s yard.
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YOUR PEER’S TEXTWhere can we add an adverb?I kept getting killed over and over again. I just wanted to throw my control out the window. I was so mad that I quit playing the game.
Eventually, I was so mad that I quit playing the game.
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ADDING SENTENCE PATTERN 4 TO YOUR WRITING… Look through your personal narrative and
find a sentence that starts with a word ending in “ly.”
If you do not have a sentence starting with an adverb ending in "ly," then edit a sentence to begin with an adverb.
Done with Pattern 4 and your story? Dialogue! Hooks! Closings Go to Weebly and look at more revising ideas.
Final Draft – due Friday
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NOW FOR THE W73C These adverbs are ALSO transitions!
1. Currently, 10. *Sleepily,2. Immediately, 11. Quickly,3. Recently, 12. Carefully4. Gradually,5. Presently,6. Simultaneously,7. Briefly,8. Finally,9. Suddenly
*Sleepily – may or may not be a transition, but will definitely work for pattern.
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EXIT Planner – CW: Add an adverb; HW –
final draft of story due Friday at the end of class.
Put your name on a Post-It. Put your Post-It on the board. I feel great about my story being done by Friday.
I hope my story will be done by Friday.Friday? You can’t be serious.
Log off. 9th hour – put computers away. Put away binders
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E&R Take out a sheet of paper. Write your
heading. Write the title: Social Media Effects After taking the quiz, write a
PARAGRAPH1st sentence (topic sentence) – main
idea of the article.Include 3 pieces of evidence from the
article.Include: who, what, where, when, whyLast sentence – closing idea