Desperation

Action- Jim Marley is seen falling to the floor holding his neck whilst bleeding heavily. Murderer stands over him holding a blood covered knife.

Dialogue: (D1) Mafia Accomplice:

Fuck, you’ve made a mess of it. Get out of here ill clean it up.

Shot- hand held for whole of first scene, Mixture of close ups and mid shots

Action- Mafia accomplice lifts body in to a fireman’s carry.

Scene 2-

Action- a lone cop stands over a tarpaulin covered body in the woods.

Dialogue (D2)1st cop:

Detectives, nasty way to go isn’t it

David Stone:Ye’ looks brutal What have we got?

1st cop:42 year old Male, A single stab wound to the stomach.

About Four inches deep.

Dan Cash: Have the Forensics been in yet?

1st Cop:Yeah, there were in this morning, we’re ok to handle it.

David stone:Right unzip him

Action: Cop removes tarpaulin.

. David Stone:Son of a bitch

Dan Cash:Well now what do we do?

Camera shot- Tripod held, pan out slight tilt from body to first cop, low angle mid/ long shot.