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Today, we're writing the conclusion!
Thursday 7th May 2020LO: To use key language to summarise my ideasLO: To ensure my writing is factual and contains a well structured conclusionLO: To include reflective comments in my conclusions and summaries
Purpose
What should it contain?
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Thursday 7th May 2020LO: To use key language to summarise my ideasLO: To ensure my writing is factual and contains a well structured conclusionLO: To include reflective comments in my conclusions and summaries
Your conclusion should leave the reader with a lasting impression of the person!
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What will makean effective conclusion?Think and share yourideas with an adult!
Success Criteria
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Success Criteria
Time connectivesMain achievements personality How they will be remembered
FactsOpinions.Quote
Reflective commentLink opening and ending
causal connectivesrepetition with word and dash
Passive voiceTo recapitulate
These are some of the
things you might want to
include in your writing!
Thursday 7th May 2020LO: To use key language to summarise my ideasLO: To ensure my writing is factual and contains a well structured conclusionLO: To include reflective comments in my conclusions and summaries
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Useful phrases/wordsTo conclude
In conclusion
To recapitulate In summary
To enumerateUltimately
In summaryUse one of these to say a
sentence aloud then write it in a powerful, complex sentence
that could work in your conclusion.
Thursday 7th May 2020LO: To use key language to summarise my ideasLO: To ensure my writing is factual and contains a well structured conclusionLO: To include reflective comments in my conclusions and summaries
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Find a quote that demonstrates
the person's character or what they were like as a person.
You can then include the quote and explain what this says about them.
Here is my quote from Anne Frank.
How might I use this to demonstrate something about her character?
"The weak fall but the strong will remain and never go under."
What does it show about her?
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Thursday 7th May 2020LO: To use key language to summarise my ideasLO: To ensure my writing is factual and contains a well structured conclusionLO: To include reflective comments in my conclusions and summaries
Optimistic in the face of adversity,bright even in the darkest hours, her resilience and love of life and humanity shine through the pages of her
insightful diary. As Anne once said: "The weak fall but the strong will remain and never go under."
Remember your speech punctuation.
I used a colon to introduce my quote as it's a longer piece of speech.
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Thursday 7th May 2020LO: To use key language to summarise my ideasLO: To ensure my writing is factual and contains a well structured conclusionLO: To include reflective comments in my conclusions and summaries
On the next slides, there are a couple
of examples of concluding statements to look at. Remember, my example is about Anne Frank so my language is suited to
the events she went through!
You can magpie some sentence structure ideas.
Take some time to brainstorm
your own 'Wow Words' for
your conclusion.
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To recapitulate, Anne Frank will be forever remembered and cherished by millions the world over for her handwritten diary (her
beloved Kitty) which documented her life as a Jew during the Holocaust and the ghastly reign of terror the autocratic Nazis
inflicted upon her and millions of innocent others. Furthermore, she is viewed my many as a hero and leader for her optimistic
approach to life and love of humanity; even when faced with the darkest of times, she still looked to the future. Her persistent personality and heart wrenching diary drove her through the
arduous life she was born into.
Thursday 7th May 2020LO: To use key language to summarise my ideasLO: To ensure my writing is factual and contains a well structured conclusionLO: To include reflective comments in my conclusions and summaries
Although unable to live to tell the tale, Anne Frank's short 'yet tragic' life lives on through her legacy- a legacy that lies in the hearts and memories of millions of others .Optimistic in the face of adversity,bright even in the darkest hours, her
resilience and love of life humanity shine through the pages of her insightful diary. As Anne once said: "The weak fall but the
strong will remain and never go under."
Success Criteria
Time connectivesMain achievements personality How they will be remembered
FactsOpinions.Quote
Reflective commentLink opening and ending
causal connectivesrepetition with word and dash
Passive voiceTo recapitulate
Here are my two examples
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Now spend some time presenting your work to a
high standard. You should have already come up with a rough plan but you can always update
this!
Here are some different ideas...
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