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    McGraw-Hill/Irwin 2005 The McGraw-Hill Companies, Inc. All rights reserved.

    Long, Formal ReportsLong, Formal Reports

    CHAPTER TWELVE

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    OverviewOverview

    The organization and content of long

    reports

    The components of a long reportStructural coherence in a long report

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    Organization and Content

    of a Long Report

    Organization and Content

    of a Long ReportPrefatory componentsTitle FlyTitle PageAuthorization MessageTransmittal Message, Preface or ForewordTable of Contents & List of IllustrationsExecutive Summary

    The Report ProperIntroductionReport Findings with Footnotes (Two or more

    divisions)Summary Conclusion, and Recommendation

    Appended PartsBibliography

    Appendix

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    Letter of TransmittalLetter of TransmittalMIDWESTERN RESEARCH, INC.

    1732 Midday AvenueChicago, IL 60607

    Telephone: 312.481.2919

    April 13, 2005

    Mr. W. Norman W. Bigbee

    Vice President in Charge of Sales

    Allied Distributors, Inc.3131 Speedall StreetAkron, Ohio 44302

    Dear Mr. Bigbee:

    Here is the report on the four makes of subcompact automobiles you

    asked me to compare last January 3.

    To help you in deciding which of the four makes you should buy as

    replacements for your fleet, I gathered what I believe to be the mostcomplete information available. Much of the operating information

    comes from your own records. The remaining data are the findings of

    both consumer research engineers and professional automotiveanalysts. Only my analyses of these data are subjective.

    I sincerely hope, Mr. Bigbee, that my analyses will help you in

    making the correct decision. I truly appreciate this assignment. And

    should you need any assistance in interpreting my analyses, please

    call on me.

    Sincerely,

    George W. Franklin

    George W. Franklin

    Associate Director

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    Table of ContentsTable of Contents

    Part Page

    B. GammaGives Best Ride............................................11

    C. Gamma Is Judged Most Durable........................................11

    V. RECOMMENDATION OF GAMMA.....................................12

    LIST OF TABLES AND CHARTS

    TABLES

    I. ORIGINAL COST OF FOUR BRANDS

    OF SUBCOMPACT CARS IN 2005.........................................3

    II. COMPARISON OF REPAIRS AND RELATED LOST

    WORKING TIME FOR FOUR MAKES OF CARS FOR

    TWO YEARS.........................................................................5

    III. COST-PER-MILE ESTIMATE OF OPERATION...................5

    IV. LIST OF STANDARD SAFETY FEATURES................... .......7

    V. COMPARATIVE WEIGHT DISTRIBUTIONS,

    BRAKING DISTANCES, AND CORNERING

    ABILITIES..............................................................................9

    VI. COMPARATIVE COMFORT AND RIDE..........................11

    CHARTS

    1. Estimated Total Operating Cost..............................................6

    2. Comparison of Acceleration Times.........................................8

    TABLE OF CONTENTS

    Part Page

    Executive Summary..................................................................................vi

    I. THE FLEET REPLACEMNT PROBLEM......................................1

    A. The Authorization by Vice President Bigbee............... ..............1

    B. Problem of Selecting Fleet Replacements........ ............... ...........1

    C. Reports and Records as Sources of Data..... .............. ................2

    D. A Preview to the Presentation...................................................2

    II. THE MAJOR FACTOR OF COST.................................................2

    A. Initial Costs Favor Beta.............................................................3

    B. Trade-in Values Show Uniformity............................................4

    C. Operating Costs Are Lowest forGamma..................................4

    D. Cost Composite Favors Gamma ...............................................6

    III. EVALUATION OF SAFETY FEATURES....................... .............6

    A. Delta Is Best Equipped with Safety Devices........ ............... ......7

    B. Acceleration Adds Extra Safety to Delta........... ...................... ..8

    C. Weight Distribution Is Best in Alpha and Gamma ...................9

    D. Gamma Has Best Braking Quality..........................................10

    IV. RIDING COMFORT AND OVERALL CONSTRUCTION........10

    A. Gamma Ranks First in Handling.............................................10

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    Executive Summary

    The recommendation of this study is that Gamma is the best buy for Allied

    Distributors, Inc.

    Authorized by Mr. Norman W. Bigbee, Vice President, on January 3. 2005, this

    report is submitted on April 13, 2005. This study gives Allied Distributors an

    insight into the problem of replacing the approximately 50 two-year-old

    subcompact cars in its present sales fleet. The basis for this recommendation is

    an analysis of cost, safety, and construction factors of four models of subcompact

    cars (Alpha, Beta, Gamma, and Delta).

    The four cars do not show much difference in ownership cost (initial cost less

    trade-in allowance after two years). On a per-car basis, Beta costs least for a

    two-year period--$3,216. Compared with costs for the other cars, Beta is $370

    underGamma, $588 under Alpha, and $634 under Delta. For the entire sales

    fleet, these differences become more significant. A purchase of 50 Betas would

    save $18,500 overGamma, $29,400 over Alpha, and $31,700 over Delta.

    Operation costs would favorGamma. Cost per mile for this car is $0.13970, as

    compared with $0.14558 for Alpha, $0.14785 for Delta, and $0.15184 for Beta.

    The totals of all costs for the 50-car fleet over the two-year period show Gamma

    to be least costly at $385,094. In second place is Alpha, with a cost of $400,208.

    Third is Delta with $406,560, and fourth is Beta with a cost of $417,532.

    On the qualities that pertain to driving safety, Gamma is again superior to the

    other cars. It has the best brakes and is tied with Alpha for the best weight

    distribution. It is second in acceleration and is again tied with Alpha for the

    number of standard safety devices. Alpha is second overall in this category,

    having the second best brakes of the group. Beta is last because of its poor

    acceleration and poor brakes.

    Construction features and handling abilities place Gamma all by itself. It scores

    higher than any other car in every category. Alpha and Delta are tied for second

    place. Again Beta is last, having poor steering and handling qualities.

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    RECOMMENDATIONS FOR 2005 REPLACEMENTS IN ALLIEDDISTRIBUTORS, INC., SALES FLEET BASED ON A COMPARISON OF

    FOUR SUBCOMPACT AUTOMOBILES

    I. PRELIMINARIES TO THE FLEET REPLACEMENT

    PROBLEM

    A. Authorization by Vice President Bigbee

    This comparison of the qualities of four brands of subcompact automobiles issubmitted April 13, 2005, to W. Norman W. Bigbee, Vice President, Allied

    Distributors, Inc. At a meeting in his office January 3, 2005, Mr. Bigbee orally

    authorized Midwestern Research, Inc., to conduct this investigation. W. George

    W. Franklin, Associate Director for Midwestern Research, served as director of

    the project.

    B. Problem of Selecting Fleet Replacements

    The objective of this study is to determine which model of subcompact

    automobile Allied Distributors, Inc., should select for replacement in its salesfleet. The firm's policy is to replace all two-year old models. It replaces

    approximately 50 automobiles each year.

    The replacements involve a major capital outlay, and the sales fleet expense

    constitutes a major sales cost. Thus, the proper selection of a new model presentsan important problem. The model selected must be economical, dependable, and

    safe. Allied is considering four subcompact automobiles as replacement

    possibilities. As instructed by Mr. Bigbee, for reasons of information security, the

    cars are identified in this report only as Alpha, Beta, Gamma, and Delta.

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    C. Reports and Records as Sources of Data

    The selection of the replacement brand is based on a comparative analysis of merits

    of the four makes. Data for the comparisons were obtained from both company

    records and statistical reports. Operating records of 10 representative cars of each

    make provide information on operating costs. These reports are summaries compiled

    by salesperson-drivers and represent actual performance of company cars under daily

    selling conditions. Additional material enumerating safety features, overall driving

    quality, and dependability comes from the reports of the Consumers Union of the

    United States, Inc.,Automotive Industries , and Bond Publishing Company'speriodical,Road and Track. Mr. Bigbee furnished the trade-in allowance granted on

    the old models. From this material extensive comparisons of the four makes are

    presented.

    D. A Preview of the Presentation

    In the following pages of the report, the four cars are compared on the basis of three

    factors: operating costs, safety, and total performance. Operating costs receive

    primary attention. In this part, the individual cost items for each car are analyzed.

    This analysis leads to the determination of the most economical of the four cars.

    Safety features make up the second factor of comparison. In this part the analysis

    centers on the presence or absence of safety features in each car and the quality of thefeatures that are present. From this analysis comes a safety ranking on the cars. The

    third factor for comparison is total performance and durability. As in preceding plan,

    here the analysis produces a ranking of the cars.

    II. THE MAJOR FACTOR OF COST

    As cost is an obvious and generally accepted requirement of any major purchase, it is

    a logical first point of concern in selecting a car to buy. Here the first concern is the

    original cost--that is, the fleet discount price. Of second interest in a logical thinking

    process is the cash difference after trade-in allowance for the old cars. These figures

    clearly indicate the cash outlay for the new fleet.

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    A. Initial Costs Favor Beta

    From Table I it is evident that Beta has the lowest window sticker price before and

    after trade-in allowances. It has a $634 margin, which must beconsidered in the light

    of what features are standard on Beta in comparison with those standard on the other

    cars. That is, the Beta may have fewer standard features included in its original cost

    and, therefore, may not be worth as much as the Alpha, Gamma, or Delta.

    Table I

    ORIGINAL COST OF FOUR BRANDS

    OF SUBCOMPACT CARS IN 2005

    Make Windows Sticker Trade-in Value Cash Costs after

    Prices for Two-Year Trade-in Allowance Old Makes*

    Alpha $9,318 $4,514 $4,804

    Beta $8,716 $4,500 $4,216

    Gamma $9,140 $4,552 $4,588

    Delta $9,700 $4,850 $4,850

    *Trade-in value for Alpha and Beta are estimatesSources: Primary andRoad and Track, 2005

    It is clear that where features are listed as standard they do not add to original cost, but

    where listed as options they do. As will be shown later, Delta has many more standardfeatures than do the other makes. In addition to a study of standard features, a close

    look at trade-in values and operating costs will also be necessary to properly evaluate

    original cost.

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    Further discussion of standard features of the cars appears in the following discussions

    of safety and per-mile operating costs.

    B. Trade-in Values Show Uniformity

    Original costs alone do not tell the complete purchase-cost story. The values of the cars

    at the ends of their useful lives (trade-in values) are a vital part of cost. In this case, thehighest trade-in value is $4,850 for Delta the lowest is $4,500 for Beta (see Table I).

    Only $350 separates the field.

    Although fairly uniform, these figures appear to be more significant when converted to

    total amounts involved in the fleet purchases. A fleet of 50 Betas would cost $160,800.The same fleet ofGammas, Alphas, and Deltas would cost $179,376, $190,222, and

    $190,500, respectively. Thus, Allied's total cost of purchasing Betas would be $18,550

    lower thanGammas, Alphas, and Deltas would cost $179,376, $190,222, and $190,500,

    respectively. Thus, Allied's total cost of purchasing Betas would be $18,550 lower than

    Gammas, $29,216 lower than Alphas, and $31,676 lower than Deltas.

    C. Operating Costs Are Lowest forGamma

    Gamma has the lowest maintenance cost of the four, 1.970 cents per mile. But Delta is

    close behind with 2.0650 cents. Both of these cars are well below the Beta and Alpha

    figures of 2.7336 and 2.7616, respectively. As shown in Table II, these costs are basedon estimates of repairs, resulting loss of working time, tire replacements, and

    miscellaneous items.

    It should be stressed here how greatly repair expense influences the estimates. Actually,two expenses are involved, for to the cost of repairs the expense of time lost by

    salespeople must be added. Obviously, a salesperson without a car is unproductive.

    Each hour lost by car repairs adds to the cost of the car's operation.

    The time lost for repair is the same for each car--five hours. Thus, the importantconsideration is the number of repairs and the costs of these repairs. On this basis, the

    Gamma has the lowest total cost burden at $1,086 (see Table II). Delta ranks second

    with $1,038. Beta is third with $1,506, and Alpha is last with $1,520.

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    Alpha's margin is $1,034 per car and $11,742 for the fleet total. Alpha's per car

    margin over Beta is $356.12, and its fleet margin is $17,806.

    D. Cost Composite Favors Gamma

    Gamma is the most economical of all cars when all cost figures are considered (see

    Table III). Its total cost per mile is 13.970 cents, as compared with 14.558 cents for

    Alpha, 14.786 cents for Delta, and 15.184 cents for Beta. These figures take on more

    meaning when converted to total fleet cost over the two-year period the cars will beowned. As shown in Chart 1, a fleet of 50Gammas would cost Allied a total of

    $385,094.

    CHART 1

    Estimated Total Operating Cost

    Gamma

    Alpha

    Delta

    Beta

    THOUSANDS OF DOLLARS

    This figure is under all other car totals. It is $15,114 below Alpha's $400,208,

    $21,466 below Delta's $406,560, and $32 ,436 belowGamma's $417,532.

    III. EVALUATION OF SAFETY FEATURES

    Even though cost receives major emphasis in this analysis, safety of the cars is also

    important How much importance safety should receive, however, is a matter for

    Allied management.

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    C. Gamma Is Judged Most Durable

    Gamma is assembled with better-than-average care. In fact, Consumer Research

    engineers have found only 16 minor defects in the car. In addition, Gamma has a

    better-than-average record for frequency of repairs. Delta, second in this

    category, has only 20 problems. Some of these problems are judged as serious,

    however.

    For instance, in the test run the starter refused to d isengage after a few hundred

    miles had accumulated on the car. The car's ignition timing, idle mixture, andidle speed were incorrectly set. An optically distorted windshield and inside

    mirror were discovered. In spite of all these defects, Delta ranks above Alpha and

    Beta on durability.

    Clearly, Gamma leads in all categories of riding comfort and overall construction.

    It handles best. It gives the best ride. And it has some definite construction

    advantages over the other three.

    V. RECOMMENDATION OF GAMMA

    Normally, this simulation cannot be merely a count of rankings on the evaluations

    made, for the qualities carry different weights. Cost, for example, is the major

    factor in most such decisions. In this instance, however, weighting is notnecessary, for one automobile is the clear leader on all three of the bases used for

    evaluation. Thus, it would lead in any arrangement of weights.

    From the data presented, Gamma is the best buy when all cost are considered. The

    total difference on a purchase of 50 automobiles is a significant $15,114 over the

    second-place brand. Gamma has a slight edge when safety features are

    considered. And it is the superior car in handling ease, ride quality, and

    construction. These facts point clearly to the recommendation that Allied buy

    Gammas this year.

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    Diagram of the Structural Coherence

    Plan of a Long, Formal Report (1 of 2)

    Diagram of the Structural Coherence

    Plan of a Long, Formal Report (1 of 2)The first part of the structural coherence planis the introduction preview. Here the readersare told how the report will unfold.Specifically, they are told what will becovered, in what order it will be covered, andthe reasons for this order.

    Because the report is long and involved,introductions are needed at the beginnings ofthe major sections to remind the readers

    where they are in the plan outlined in thepreview. These parts introduce the topics tobe discussed, point the way through thesections, and relate the topics of the sectionsto the overall plan of the report.

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    Diagram of the Structural Coherence

    Plan of a Long, Formal Report (2 of 2)

    Diagram of the Structural Coherence

    Plan of a Long, Formal Report (2 of 2)

    Conclusions and summaries for each

    major report section help readers to

    gather their thoughts and see the

    relationships of the report topics.

    Completing the plan, a final conclusion or

    summary section brings the report to a

    head. Here, previously drawn section

    summaries and conclusions are broughttogether. From these a final conclusion

    and recommendation may be drawn.

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    Coherence through backwardCoherence through backward-- and forwardand forward--lookinglooking

    introductory paragraphs and sentencesintroductory paragraphs and sentences (1 of 2)(1 of 2)

    Coherence through backwardCoherence through backward-- and forwardand forward--lookinglooking

    introductory paragraphs and sentencesintroductory paragraphs and sentences (1 of 2)(1 of 2)

    All of this evidence appears to justify our taking steps to correct

    the problem. Thus, it is now appropriate to discuss these steps

    in detail.

    For reasons that have been shown, three of the work plans arenot acceptable to employees. As will be shown, they strongly

    favor the fourth, which will now be discussed detail.

    Having concluded that the machine has failed, we must

    determine whether it can be altered to meet our needs. Exhaustive research has revealed that the success of a

    voluntary plan is influenced by the facts involved. Thus, it is

    necessary that we now examine the facts of our unique

    situation.

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    Coherence through backwardCoherence through backward-- and forwardand forward--lookinglooking

    introductory paragraphs and sentencesintroductory paragraphs and sentences (2 of 2)(2 of 2)

    Coherence through backwardCoherence through backward-- and forwardand forward--lookinglooking

    introductory paragraphs and sentencesintroductory paragraphs and sentences (2 of 2)(2 of 2)

    From the preceding analysis, it appears evident that sales are

    likely to decline sharply in the next quarter. Before we adjust

    for this development, however, it is necessary that we

    consider the outlook for the economy in the region. Such areview follows.

    To this point, two facts are obvious. Sales have dropped

    sharply, and the company has a new advertising agency. Now

    it is necessary to determine whether these two facts have a

    cause-effect relationship.

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    The harder you work, theharder it is to surrender.--Vince Lombardi