Feedback – Nando’s PEE Assessment

LO: To be able to understand what could be improved, and write a ‘response to marking’ paragraph

Monday, 21 March 2016

What presentational devices and language devices have been used to

make the advert persuasive?

In each paragraph, you must have…•P

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When quoting text from the advert, you must…• Use inverted commas• What are inverted commas?

• The Nando’s advert uses the headline #Wing Roulette• The sub-heading of the advert used in the advert asks the audience

what they gonna get?

Use connectives• What is a connective?

• Word that joins one part of a text to another

Contrast• However• Although• Except• Unless

Cause/effect• Because• Therefore• So• Consequently • As a result of

AddingAndAlsoFurthermore

Embedding quotes• The quote is inside a sentence

• ‘What you gonna get?’• The advert uses the colloquial phrase ‘what you gonna get?’• The colloquial phrase ‘what you gonna get?’ is below the headline

Word Classes – higher level skill!• Identify the word class if you zoom into a word

• Noun• Verb• Adverb• Adjective

• Intu Watford is ridiculously big and scary• Newton are the best house ever

Response to marking paragraph1. Look at the targets and choose the paragraph you

could improve most on2. Using that paragraph, write a ‘response to

marking’ paragraph, focusing on your targets, and what we have talked about in the lesson.