如何在高考英语 写作中得高分

华盛虹溪中学 孙伟

2006.4

一、怎样运用复杂结构

二、怎样运用高级词汇：

三、常见语法错误分析：

四、学会使用恰当的关联词

五、背诵一些题材的常识性 语句：

一、怎样运用复杂结构：1. 改变时态

The bell is ringing now. ( 一般 )

2. 改变语态People suggest that the conference be put off. ( 一般 )

There goes the bell. ( 高级 )

It is suggested that the conference be put off. ( 高级 )

3. 使用不定式

4. 使用过去分词

He is so kind that he can help me. ( 一般 )He is so kind as to help me. ( 高级 )

She walked out of the room and many students followed her. ( 一般 )Followed by many students, she… . ( 高级 )Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten . ( 一般 )Once seen, it can … . ( 高级 )

5. 使用 v-ing 形式When he arrives please give me an e-mail. ( 一般 )

If the weather permits, I’ll come tomorrow. ( 一般 )

On his arriving/ arrival, please give…. ( 高级 )

Weather permitting, I’ll come tomorrow. ( 高级 )Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. ( 一般 )Now our School has three teachers, teaching 48 pupils. ( 高级 )

It disappointed everybody that he didn’t turn up. ( 一般 )

I happened to have met him. ( 一般 )

6. 使用名词性从句

The fact that he didn’t turn up disappointed everybody. ( 高级 )

It happened that I had met him. ( 高级 )To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. ( 一般 )What surprised him is that the girl…. ( 高级 )

7. 使用状语从句I won’t believe what he says. ( 一般 )

If you come back before six o’clock, you can go out. ( 一般 )

The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. ( 一般 )

No matter what he says, I won’t believe. ( 高级 )

You can go out on condition that you come back before…. ( 高级 )

The meal was so nice that we all…. ( 高级 )

8. 使用定语从句The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. ( 一般 )The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of. ( 高级 )I studied Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer at school. ( 一般 )The subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English…. ( 高级 )

9. 使用虚拟语气The ship didn’t sink because there were the efforts of the captain. ( 一般 )

I wasn’t invited to the party, so I didn’t attend it. ( 一般 )If I had been invited to the party, I would have attended it. ( 高级 )

But for the efforts of the captain, the ship would have sunk. ( 高级 )

10. 使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920. ( 一般 )It was not until 1920 that regular radio…. ( 高级 )

Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. ( 高级 )

Though I’m weak, I will make the effort. ( 一般 )

How glad we were to see the crops and...! ( 高级 )

We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well. ( 一般 )

11. 使用并列句If you go through the gate, you’ll find the entrance to Bear Country. ( 一般 )Go through the gate, and you’ll find…. ( 高级 )

I got up late this morning, otherwise I could have caught the early bus. ( 高级 )

I got up late this morning. I didn’t catch the early bus. ( 一般 )

The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. ( 高级 )

When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. ( 一般 )

二、怎样运用高级词汇：As a result, the plan was a failure. ( 一般 )

She went to Austria in order to study music. ( 一般 )

Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. ( 一般 )

The plan turned out to be a failure. ( 高级 )

She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music. ( 高级 )

Thanks to the good weather, our journey…. ( 高级 )

At the news of her death, he went…. ( 高级 )

She has trouble in pronouncing the word. ( 高级 )

Whose turn is it to be on duty today? ( 高级 )

When he heard she had died, he went pale with sorrow. ( 一般 )

She can’t correctly pronounce the word. ( 一般 )

Who will be on duty today? ( 一般 )

She doesn’t like sports.

She cares nothing for sports.

We had to go home.

What we had to do was go home.

三、常见语法错误分析：1. 句子缺谓语

1) The building like a match box. 2) He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom.

1) A worker of the farm lead us to the field.2) All the students like books that was written by Lu Xun.

2. 主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误。

3. 时态错误

4. 词性混用

1) When he came back, he found that his wife has gone to bed.2) What are you doing this time yesterday?

1) She enjoys study English.2) If anyone against the plan, please let me know.

5. 介词误用

6. 冠词误用

1) In my surprise, he has got the first prize.2) He came here to attend the meeting by a new car.3) Don’t read under the sun.

1) We elected Li Hua the monitor of the Class Five.2) Once upon a time, there was an one-eyed lion.3) The history is actually a very interesting subject.

7. 名词的数混淆

8. 动词用法错误

1) It is rare to see such a nice weather in Beijing.2) There is always traffic jam.1) Where are you come from?2) When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting for me.3) He didn’t notice the teacher to come into the classroom.4) The accident was happened in 1999.

9. 习惯用法错误

1) The actor in this movie is very beautiful.2) I and My parents were working in the fields at that time.3) The reason is because he does not know what to do next.

四、学会使用恰当的关联词：1. 表示平行、对等或选择关系and ， both…and, as well as, together with, neither…nor, also, not only…but also, either…or, as well.2. 表示转折关系but, yet, however, nevertheless ( 然而 ), in spite of, although, otherwise, while, after all.

3. 表示对比关系

4. 表示因果关系

on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand, just like, unlike, in the same way, at the same time

so, for, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to, on account ( 理由 ) of.

5. 表示时间、顺序关系

6. 表示递进、强调关系

shortly afterwards, first, second…, then, next, finally, for one thing, for another, in the end, eventually( 最后 , 终于 )

besides, furthermore ( 此外 ), what’s more, in addition, moreover ( 而且 ), worse still, to make matters worse, indeed, certainly, surely, above all

7. 表示解释、说明关系

8. 表示结论

namely ( 也就是 ), actually, such as, for example, for instance, that is to say, in other words, and so on, to tell you the truth, according to this

in short, in brief, in a word, in general, as you know, as far as I know, on the whole, in conclusion, at last, finally

五、背诵一些题材的常识性语句：通知：开头语 :

结束语 :

Attention, please.May I have your attention, please?I have an announcement to make.

Don’t forget the time and the address.I’m sure you will have a lot of fun.That’s all, thank you.

欢迎词：开头语 :

结束语 :

Welcome to …Now let me tell you something about …I’m going to give you a detailed description of…Let me show you around…I’m sure you’ll have a good trip.That’s all, thank you.

写信：开头语 :

结束语 :

I’m glad to hear from you.I’m writing to tell you something about…How are you getting along with your…?I really don’t know how to thank you for…Please give my best regards to... Remember me to your parents.I’m looking forward to hearng from you soon.Best wishes.